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tiny baby bird mouth is constantly open parents always feed 101 in a row (off the bad wagon) 191 - Poetry Contest sponsored by PD Linda 12th November 2014

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Date: 12/20/2016 11:34:00 PM
Congratulations Jan, this is such a sweet and at the same time intelligently crafted haiku.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 12/25/2016 4:55:00 AM
It has a second meaning Darren lol:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/20/2016 10:15:00 PM
Congratulations on your win with this lovely Haiku, Jan.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 12/25/2016 4:55:00 AM
Thanks Afzal:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/20/2016 6:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. Hugs Eve
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 12/25/2016 4:56:00 AM
Thanks Eve:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 12/20/2016 3:32:00 PM
Jan, this is deep and one of my favorite haiku, Congratulations on your awesome win, stop by and share a little smile on my blog, "FEED ME." ----"happy holidays" Always & Forever ~LINDA~
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Date: 12/20/2016 4:36:00 PM
Hi Jan, I know exactly what this poem means to you, if you have any poems, you really want me to read send me the names. Hope to see you around my new poem, I love when you leave your energetic spirit on my page.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 12/20/2016 4:12:00 PM
I am delighted to place so well in your contest Linda - there is a hidden meaning behind this poem lol lol so I am so so pleased it will get more exposure through your contest:-) :-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 10/5/2016 5:10:00 PM
Jan, it always seems to be the babies. It's a piece that is mind blowing. I really like this. Linda
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 10/5/2016 5:14:00 PM
:-) sometimes its grown up 'babies'that still continue to be fed Linda:-) hugs Jan xx
Date: 1/2/2015 7:48:00 PM
Peace and God's Blessings to you and yours. Very nicely written and Thank you for visiting my page. I'm always grateful, and humbled.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 1/2/2015 8:08:00 PM
thanks for the lovely comment Don:-) Hugs jan xx
Date: 11/12/2014 3:47:00 PM
hahaha. Yes, I GET it!!! Good one, Jan.
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Date: 11/12/2014 4:15:00 PM
Thanks Andrea for dropping by:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/12/2014 3:43:00 PM
Yes, yes the one that has its mouth open gets the food..Great work..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Date: 11/12/2014 4:15:00 PM
Thanks for dropping by Sara:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/12/2014 3:40:00 PM
The wonders of nature, well said :) hugsxx
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Date: 11/12/2014 4:14:00 PM
Thanks Cas:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/12/2014 1:13:00 PM
Wow, Jan. If I thought you had access to my files I would say you copied me. I wrote one a couple years ago almost identical. Great minds think a like.
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/12/2014 7:24:00 PM
I have no doubt of that Jan. I will send you a copy so you can see.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 11/12/2014 2:26:00 PM
I promise it came out of my imagination Brenda:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/12/2014 12:57:00 PM
This haiku is an eye-opener, Jan; babies have every right to be looked after, but once they grow up they have to become self-dependent. hugs // paul
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 11/12/2014 2:25:00 PM
You are spot on my friend ...Got it it one Paul :-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/12/2014 12:29:00 PM
I love these haiku -- such great images . . . as the baby bird grows it will also feed a hungry crew. . . may your sweet words fill the mouths and ears of generations to come.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 11/12/2014 2:24:00 PM
Thanks so much David:-) Hugs janxx xx
Date: 11/12/2014 11:36:00 AM
If the baby bird doesn't spread its wings and learn to eat on it's own it will be dependent on the parents its whole life...excellent Jan...hugs Tim
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 11/12/2014 11:54:00 AM
Got it in one Tim - that can and does happen:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/12/2014 10:04:00 AM
Jan this poem tends to my heart. I so much love birds. thanks for this heartfelt poem
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 11/12/2014 10:14:00 AM
Thanks Jasmine:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/12/2014 9:55:00 AM
Yes, once in my childhood I acted father of a baby bird. I fed him/her balls of whole wheat. a gluttony monster. Love Jan...rajat
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 11/12/2014 10:13:00 AM
Thanks Rajat:-) Hugs Jan xx
Date: 11/12/2014 9:52:00 AM
Excellent again Jan, as poets in the hardest of times we are the most prolific.
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 11/12/2014 9:53:00 AM
Thanks Maurice for your lovely comment :-) Hugs Jan x
Date: 11/12/2014 9:42:00 AM
Wonderfully done, dear Jan!
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JAN ALLISON
Date: 11/12/2014 9:46:00 AM
Thank you so much Demetrios:-) Hugs Jan xx