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featureless blur sharp rapier claws fend a black featureless blur... death is no lap cat (haiku) 04/07/2022 Black Cat Haiku Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Robert James Liguori

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Christuraj Alex

Date: 4/10/2022 6:37:00 AM

Great on black cat. Congratulations!

Emile Pinet
Date: 4/10/2022 8:21:00 AM

Thanks, Christuraj, I appreciate your comments, my friend, Emile.

L Milton Hankins

Date: 4/7/2022 7:15:00 AM

Incredible! Love your choice of words to describe a fierce cat.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 4/7/2022 2:34:00 PM

I'm not a fan of haiku either, Emile. I'm a very wordy person, as you might have guessed!

Emile Pinet
Date: 4/7/2022 9:12:00 AM

Thanks, Milt, I'm not a big fan of haiku, but I do own an independent black cat, have a good day my friend, Emile.