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Featured Poet**mr. Brooks

An Acrostic poem from a featured artist.. 1/20/2010


**Patience**

Partly to blame I
Accept my penance.
To quick to love,knowing the end was
Imminent. Yet I strive to
Endure......to overcome
Never thinking that loves
Choices,would lead me to an
Extreme conundrum!!! 

ChocolateWoW
Sam Brooks

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January 27, 2010 at 8:36 AM

This is a profound poem with much for the reader to reflect on. Thank you for sharing it with us and for your kind comment. Karen

Nicole Sharon Brown

January 22, 2010 at 4:49 AM

I like this one by Mr. Brooks, keep on writing, dude!

Raul Moreno

January 21, 2010 at 11:56 PM

AMAZING Mr. Brooks...this one speaks volumes...Raul

Andrea Dietrich

January 21, 2010 at 12:38 PM

Good one here! I got a bit confused with loves. Just put love's (with apostrophe) there! An enjoyable read! andrea

Iolanda Scripca

January 20, 2010 at 7:15 PM

Great Acrostic, Jared. Thanks for your comments. Love, Iolanda

Marty Owens

January 20, 2010 at 2:33 PM

Acrostics are one of my favorites and this is very good...Both these guys need to join PS...Marty

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

January 20, 2010 at 1:14 PM

Unique.. I like Acrostics.. challenging ..always up for a good challenge.. OK Mr. J. u and Mr. Brooks are on.. threesome sounds intriguing ..writing that is... but u know me by now don't u?? take all the time u need for the collab.. let me knw when u and Mr. B. are ready... to culminate the poem ... this might be a first for the Soup.. do u think it can handle us?? luv.. "Sweetheart"