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Featured Poet****dino Bravo

*****This poem was a love letter written by one of my dearest friends who is also my
room-mate... He asked me to take this letter and make it into a poem for him... Three
pages condensed to this....
In the last month I have been away from the soup because I have been playing muse... I
have posted two poems by Mr. Samuel Brooks, and now this poem from Dino Bravo......  Both
of these men have the "Gift of Gab" like me... Meaning witty, and comfortable with the
opposite sex... We are three wolves on the hunt... The Three Amigo's:  Asavvy1, Dino
Bravo, and Mr. Chocolate WoW.... Dino wants your honesty, as do I... Seeing as I condensed
it.....:JP]******

**Thoughts of the One**

I want somebody to spend my life with,
share my love with.
Someone to show me how special she is,
share her love with me.
Wishing I had someone who feels me,
is kinda similar to me.
A love blatantly,
visible. 
A vibrant love we both can see.
We don't have to share common hobbies,
differences in many ways.
But communication is key,
embracing love,  
together,
we end our days.

An unconditional love!
One that thrives beyond death.
Screaming for you silently,
with every deep breath.


Dino Bravo
01/20/2010
The Balding Hippie

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Charmaine Chircop March 8, 2010 at 1:26 PM I found the poem of Dino,Ok Jared ,i got it:)...Im sorry Dino,if i used yor name,it was a case that Dino rhymes with cappuccino:)..and its a good name to use in poetrymit rhymes sweetly..:)Love this love letter..and Jared i love the way you've transmitted it into a Love poem,Wonderful:)bravo Jared and bravo Dino Bravo..Charma:)

Nicole Sharon Brown January 22, 2010 at 4:50 AM You know what you want go out there and get it, with skills like this you should have no problems at all. Great write!

Brian Strand January 21, 2010 at 12:05 AM Keep writing the poetry Dino,especially when you find her.With this sensitivity you will know for sure.Rgds JP and & thanks for your welcome comments today

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 20, 2010 at 1:28 PM Maybe I could suggest u read A Male Me when u have time... it will give u some insight in a different format of my own personal opinion of "perfection".. in romance .... "Sweetie"

Linda-Marie Sweetheart January 20, 2010 at 1:22 PM Well quite emotional and I never knew guys were looking for the same kind of love that females are looking for... sounds like a perfect lady u want.. don't give up she is around.. maybe she will find u ... kudos to u Jared... my friend... on your composition.. u have done it justice as I know u are looking for that "perfection" too... great job guys... keep it going... luv.. "Sweetheart"

John Freeman January 20, 2010 at 9:23 AM This is a cool expression of what God's true created human seeks for, the longing to love and be loved. Jared. Sincerely, Moses

Carolyn Devonshire January 20, 2010 at 8:08 AM Jared, your friends have some great talent and I hope you can encourage them to share more work with us. The longing for "unconditional love" is one to which most of us can relate and Dino describes this desire so eloquently with his words. Please give him and Samuel my regards and convey my admiration. Love, Carolyn