Feathery Fluff

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Yalto
Invented by Edward Ibeh: line 1 to 15: 3,4,2,4,5,3,2,3,2,3,3,5,6,1,5. Centered, no rhyme.

snowflakes, like feathery fluff, tumble from frigid skies spreading out like a down duvet feeling snugly soft, and yet icy cold to the touch, a shroud, befitting autumn's splendiferous dead, wove by winter’s hand (Yalto) 02/28/2020

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Caren Krutsinger

Date: 2/28/2020 4:08:00 PM

Wow, just when I think your poetry cannot be any more beautiful you write this one! A masterpiece Emile.

Emile Pinet
Date: 2/28/2020 4:12:00 PM

Thanks Caren, it's always a pleasure to hear from you my friend, Emile.