Feathers of Red

Singed feathers of red. Into silver engine winds. Alas, Alouettes.

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Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/16/2023 7:41:00 PM

Love it!

R J. Elless
Date: 7/22/2023 5:25:00 AM

Thanks Kim. I havent done many of the Haikus. Sorta fun. Only three lines. Stay Creative.

Panagiota Romios

Date: 6/3/2023 12:51:00 PM

Very well done Haiku.. Pangie

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/11/2023 6:43:00 PM

Whoa! The graphic imagery! Wow! (And I had never realized that an alouette was a kind of bird. ~ Dumbkopf ... (Thought it was a football player from Montreal. lol).

R J. Elless
Date: 5/12/2023 9:07:00 AM

Canadian football is that Soccer or rugby? Ha Ha! Good one. Thank you, keep Rolling. Aey

R J. Elless

Date: 5/9/2023 3:30:00 PM

Thank You, Sotto. I had it 757 and changed it. And it sounds better. I appreciate. Your Comments. Keep Rolling.

Sotto Poet

Date: 5/9/2023 9:11:00 AM

Great haiku, your imagery is fantastic and you convey such a fine scene with your well-picked words. Thanks for the uplifting comment on my page