Feathers of Red

Singed feathers of red.
Into silver engine winds.
Alas, Alouettes.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Rodrigues Avatar
July 16, 2023 at 7:41 PM
Love it!
Elless Avatar
July 22, 2023 at 5:25 AM
Thanks Kim. I havent done many of the Haikus. Sorta fun. Only three lines. Stay Creative.
Romios Avatar
June 3, 2023 at 12:51 PM
Very well done Haiku.. Pangie
Wolf Avatar
May 11, 2023 at 6:43 PM
Whoa! The graphic imagery! Wow! (And I had never realized that an alouette was a kind of bird. ~ Dumbkopf ... (Thought it was a football player from Montreal. lol).
Elless Avatar
May 12, 2023 at 9:07 AM
Canadian football is that Soccer or rugby? Ha Ha! Good one. Thank you, keep Rolling. Aey
Elless Avatar
May 9, 2023 at 3:30 PM
Thank You, Sotto. I had it 757 and changed it. And it sounds better. I appreciate. Your Comments. Keep Rolling.
Poet Avatar
May 9, 2023 at 9:11 AM
Great haiku, your imagery is fantastic and you convey such a fine scene with your well-picked words. Thanks for the uplifting comment on my page
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