Featherless Angel

nurse patting her hard
my featherless angel sleeps~
she will never cry
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Empress Avatar
November 6, 2023 at 3:57 AM
Such a heartfelt senryu, i felt the depth of what you’ve delivered here in few syllables, poignant and poetic! Thank you for writing! Congratulations on winning
Ashley Avatar
November 2, 2023 at 6:18 PM
Oh! Dear Debjani, the mist of emotions flow from this eloquent poem with softness and purity. Your soulful pen spills with nuanced finesse. The moving beauty of your senryu touches my heart deeply. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Rolland Avatar
November 2, 2023 at 4:33 PM
s.o subtle and touching, beautiful poem, thanks
Buhagiar Avatar
November 2, 2023 at 9:52 AM
So sad really but so well written, A great Senryu. Blessings.
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