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Featherless Angel

nurse patting her hard my featherless angel sleeps~ she will never cry

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Ink Empress

Date: 11/6/2023 3:57:00 AM

Such a heartfelt senryu, i felt the depth of what you’ve delivered here in few syllables, poignant and poetic! Thank you for writing! Congratulations on winning

Susan Ashley

Date: 11/2/2023 6:18:00 PM

Oh! Dear Debjani, the mist of emotions flow from this eloquent poem with softness and purity. Your soulful pen spills with nuanced finesse. The moving beauty of your senryu touches my heart deeply. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Yann Rolland

Date: 11/2/2023 4:33:00 PM

s.o subtle and touching, beautiful poem, thanks

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 11/2/2023 9:52:00 AM

So sad really but so well written, A great Senryu. Blessings.

Mat Ignacio

Date: 11/2/2023 8:33:00 AM

intriguing, subtle, nicely conveyed