Feathered Snow Non Traditional Haiku

Still morning

The flapping of a gull’s wings

In feathered snow
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Henderson Avatar
December 29, 2010 at 9:11 PM
Another one, just perfect.
Haick Avatar
December 29, 2010 at 6:05 PM
Beautiful imagery, Eiken! Always, Audrey
Fillmore Avatar
December 29, 2010 at 7:57 AM
I see this very vividly! excellent imagery... Thanks so much for your recent comment on haiku 1, appreciated:)
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