Christopher Vidal Poet Haiku

Feathered Friend

Swaying with the breeze
While standing firm on a branch
Blowing wind whispers

Fly my feathered friend
Ascend into the bright sky
A fleeting moment

With a steady gaze
Silhouette quickly fading
Empty hands, freedom!

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Raja Rahman February 12, 2016 at 11:15 PM This is the one I like best buddy! Quite after my heart! Christopher Vidal February 13, 2016 at 5:56 PM Thanks a lot man! I'm glad you liked it buddy! Cheers! >> Christopher

Skat A February 2, 2016 at 11:25 PM Hi Christopher, I was hoping to see a new one from you this year. :) you write so well. How about another footle or haiku. :) Anyways, the imagery here's a great one. I like the fleeting moment end. Always ~SKAT~ Christopher Vidal February 3, 2016 at 3:06 AM Hello SKAT! Thank you for the very nice words!:) Sorry SKAT, I'm very busy at work but if the inspiration comes then hopefully! I appreciate your suggestion.:) Thanks again, so much!!! >> Christopher