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Feathered Friend

Swaying with the breeze While standing firm on a branch Blowing wind whispers Fly my feathered friend Ascend into the bright sky A fleeting moment With a steady gaze Silhouette quickly fading Empty hands, freedom!

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Raja Rahman

Date: 2/12/2016 11:15:00 PM

This is the one I like best buddy! Quite after my heart!

Christopher Vidal
Date: 2/13/2016 5:56:00 PM

Thanks a lot man! I'm glad you liked it buddy! Cheers! >> Christopher

Skat A

Date: 2/2/2016 11:25:00 PM

Hi Christopher, I was hoping to see a new one from you this year. :) you write so well. How about another footle or haiku. :) Anyways, the imagery here's a great one. I like the fleeting moment end. Always ~SKAT~

Christopher Vidal
Date: 2/3/2016 3:06:00 AM

Hello SKAT! Thank you for the very nice words!:) Sorry SKAT, I'm very busy at work but if the inspiration comes then hopefully! I appreciate your suggestion.:) Thanks again, so much!!! >> Christopher