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I enjoy watching birds they remind me of young children, so free in their joyful play.

Cold Crisp Winter, Birds fly low Crowding the feeder, Chirping in the thicket branches; Fleeting freely, wearing fluffy feathered winter wings; Spiraling patterns, meandering flight, rising and falling in the open sky. February 24, 2017 Submission for Contest: F-Form Fibonacci Sponsored by: Broken Wings

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Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 2/4/2017 10:14:00 AM

Very nice Fibonacci in form, structure and subject, Paulette. A 7! Thanks again for visiting my page.Good luck in the contest!:) Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light God bless you!:) D.

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 2/4/2017 11:25:00 AM

Hi Dorian, Thank you for your kind comment, it is so encouraging. It is only recently I have publicly displayed my poetry, so it's nice to get such positive feedback.....and God Bless you too!

David Bose

Date: 2/3/2017 9:47:00 AM

Makes me smile, it's so fun to read. Rolls off my lips and so concise--really nice. Good job, thanks for it. Dave

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 2/3/2017 12:11:00 PM

Hi Dave, Thank you, glad you enjoyed reading it, as I had fun writing it!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/2/2017 6:30:00 PM

this is so beautiful with its alliteration, Paulette. Wow, I would place it really high if it were in my own contest!

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 2/2/2017 8:34:00 PM

Andrea, Thank you.....it is my first Fibonacci and your comment really is encouraging, especially coming from such as gifted a poetess!

Daniel Turner

Date: 2/1/2017 4:41:00 PM

I like birds too and I also like this poem. Your use of alliteration is just the right touch, Paulette:)

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 2/2/2017 8:36:00 PM

Hi Daniel, Thank you.....It is my first fibonacci and why not include a bit of alliteration.....always love they way the words roll......

Jan Allison

Date: 2/1/2017 1:26:00 PM

I love the clever way you have structured the poem Paulette its a delight to read:-) hugs Jan xx

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 2/1/2017 3:33:00 PM

Hi Jan, Thank you for your positive comment....my first attempt at fibonacci, so this is really nice to hear!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/1/2017 12:54:00 PM

- A lovely poem, Paulette - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 2/1/2017 3:32:00 PM

Hi Anne-Lise, Thank you. This was the first time I every attempted to do a Fibonacci.....lots of fun!

Chris Green

Date: 2/1/2017 12:33:00 PM

Really nicely done Paulette. Good luck in the contest. I know this form is difficult at best but you made it look easy. Loved the theme of your piece too.

Paulette Calasibetta
Date: 2/1/2017 3:31:00 PM

HI Chris, Thank you for your comments. This was the first Fibonacci....it was challenging but lots of fun!