Paulette Calasibetta Poet Fibonacci

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I enjoy watching birds they remind me of young children, so free in their joyful play.  

Feather'D Friends

Cold
                         Crisp
                               Winter,
                                       Birds fly low
                                                    Crowding the feeder,
                                                             Chirping in the thicket branches;
                     Fleeting freely, wearing fluffy feathered winter wings;
        Spiraling patterns, meandering flight, rising and falling in the open sky.
         







February 24, 2017 
Submission for Contest: F-Form Fibonacci
Sponsored by: Broken Wings

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Dorian Petersen Potter February 4, 2017 at 10:14 AM Very nice Fibonacci in form, structure and subject, Paulette. A 7! Thanks again for visiting my page.Good luck in the contest!:) Wishing you a very lovely weekend!In his light God bless you!:) D. Paulette Calasibetta February 4, 2017 at 11:25 AM Hi Dorian, Thank you for your kind comment, it is so encouraging. It is only recently I have publicly displayed my poetry, so it's nice to get such positive feedback.....and God Bless you too!

David Bose February 3, 2017 at 9:47 AM Makes me smile, it's so fun to read. Rolls off my lips and so concise--really nice. Good job, thanks for it. Dave Paulette Calasibetta February 3, 2017 at 12:11 PM Hi Dave, Thank you, glad you enjoyed reading it, as I had fun writing it!

Andrea Dietrich February 2, 2017 at 6:30 PM this is so beautiful with its alliteration, Paulette. Wow, I would place it really high if it were in my own contest! Paulette Calasibetta February 2, 2017 at 8:34 PM Andrea, Thank you.....it is my first Fibonacci and your comment really is encouraging, especially coming from such as gifted a poetess!

Daniel Turner February 1, 2017 at 4:41 PM I like birds too and I also like this poem. Your use of alliteration is just the right touch, Paulette:) Paulette Calasibetta February 2, 2017 at 8:36 PM Hi Daniel, Thank you.....It is my first fibonacci and why not include a bit of alliteration.....always love they way the words roll......

Jan Allison February 1, 2017 at 1:26 PM I love the clever way you have structured the poem Paulette its a delight to read:-) hugs Jan xx Paulette Calasibetta February 1, 2017 at 3:33 PM Hi Jan, Thank you for your positive comment....my first attempt at fibonacci, so this is really nice to hear!

Anne-Lise Andresen February 1, 2017 at 12:54 PM - A lovely poem, Paulette - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Paulette Calasibetta February 1, 2017 at 3:32 PM Hi Anne-Lise, Thank you. This was the first time I every attempted to do a Fibonacci.....lots of fun!

Chris Green February 1, 2017 at 12:33 PM Really nicely done Paulette. Good luck in the contest. I know this form is difficult at best but you made it look easy. Loved the theme of your piece too. Paulette Calasibetta February 1, 2017 at 3:31 PM HI Chris, Thank you for your comments. This was the first Fibonacci....it was challenging but lots of fun!