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by the colorful paraders wearing hats with feathers.

tickling my soft sensitive skin sounds like violin into my soul can feel it all glitters and paint full bathed suffice one's need can’t spurn the air adorn and blare drums and tambourines start to play they lovely sway dance in rhythm highlight the theme Oct. 25,2012 Note: The feathers ornamenting the street parade/paraders especially the ones decorated on hats of musicians and others who entertains. So lovely they are in the sight of all spectators!

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Skat A

Date: 7/4/2015 11:45:00 PM

Hello Leonora, CONGRATULATIONS, on having your poem featured on the soup's home page. Enjoy the coming week. Take Care ~SKAT~

Len Gasun
Date: 7/5/2015 9:49:00 AM

Hi, my dearest sis and friend Skat. Thank you so much for your warm congratulatory comments and for letting me know that my poem was featured at soup. God bless and have a happy 4th day of July! Sending you hugs and smiles!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/1/2012 2:51:00 PM

so no Halloween celebrating over there, huh? DANG. I guess the victims of Sandy did not celebrate either this year. sad times for people in that storm!!

Vesna Kovrlija

Date: 10/31/2012 12:41:00 PM

Great write!

Joy Wellington

Date: 10/30/2012 10:23:00 PM

Hi Leon...I, like your"Feather" write that describes a carnival seen to the hilt. Felt the rhythm of those drums. Thanks for your heartwarming comment on my Frozen Heart poem. One love my friend! Joy Wells

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/30/2012 12:19:00 PM

hi nora, just had to drop by to say your contest wasa dleight to everyone... hope you'll run another one soon... thanks for making me part of the poetic journey... any new poems?... i'm looking forard to read you again..:) huggs and love

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/30/2012 8:11:00 AM

Hey, Leonora, how was your first contest for you? DId you enjoy judging it? thanks for my win and I am waiting for a brand new poem from you!! happy Tuesday!

Richard Palmer

Date: 10/30/2012 7:29:00 AM

it made me feel light,lol,wonderful write Leonora

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 10/30/2012 5:14:00 AM

so beautiful poem my dear friend Norie. so like it :) God bless!

Sandy Ivy D

Date: 10/29/2012 6:29:00 PM

Hi libramate. hugs and more hugs. Thank you for the sweet win. SandyIvy

Sandy Ivy D
Date: 10/29/2012 6:29:00 PM

a beautiful poem,

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 10/29/2012 10:49:00 AM

SUCH A GLORIOUS WRITE LEONORA ON FEATHER THEME ..A TREASURED DELIGHT TO READ LUV .. THANKXX SO SO MUCH FOR MY FIRST PLACE WIN .. ENJOYED WRITING NEW FOR U AND ABOUT SUNSHINE TOO .. AM HONORED TO BE AMONG SO MANY TALENTED POETS .. HAPPY U LIKE MY WORDS DEAR FRIEND ..

Erich Goller

Date: 10/29/2012 9:34:00 AM

tha's a very lovely expressed poem, nice rhyming, I enjoyed reading it.God bless you, Hugs!Erich

Joann Grisetti

Date: 10/29/2012 8:41:00 AM

A lovely poem, rhythmic and sensual. Thank you for placing my poem in your contest.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 10/28/2012 9:54:00 AM

Leo Sissy -pooh...your title alone is sweet... the image parades a good exciting movement with sound and glee... I love the feast and the main highlighted theme... a beautiful sight... love always your poet sister and beyond... xoxo...pd

Nette Onclaud

Date: 10/27/2012 1:05:00 AM

i love this and it's a winner in my book, nora...you 2nd like is tremendous but has 5 syllables??.. ohhh, still a masterpiece!... love and huggs!..:)

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/26/2012 5:26:00 PM

A delightful poem Leonora. - Have a enjoyable weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Harry Horsman

Date: 10/25/2012 4:17:00 PM

Oh just love those parades, and this poem is visual, Leonora, awesome poem...

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/25/2012 2:45:00 PM

Thanks for showing an example of this form you introduced to us. I think yours is the feather contest, right? I would really enjoy seeing this site as you described it. Lovely!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/25/2012 12:49:00 PM

Thank you for posting your amazing poetry today I enjoyed reading it Leonora and I wish you the best in the contest. I wish I could keep up with all the poets here but I can't. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol

Bukang Liwayway

Date: 10/25/2012 4:26:00 AM

so beautiful poem my friend...I remembered this during the Ati-Atihan Festival. another great write from one of my favorite poet on PS. thanks for sharing..mwuah!! (^_^)