Feather

Rigid passion tipped
 Cupid's arrow finds it's mark
   I am the feather



Honorable mention in Raul Moreno's contest
"Sentiments of the Heart"

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Carol Sunshine Brown

June 10, 2011 at 6:44 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Amy. It is an honor to be on the list with you this week. May you find the inspiration to keep you writing. Love, Carol

Vince Suzadail Jr.

June 9, 2011 at 9:47 AM

Congrats Amy on your senryu being featured. Vince

Dr.Ram Mehta

June 7, 2011 at 8:01 AM

Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Amy

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

June 5, 2011 at 5:35 PM

Congrats AWESOME AMY on your featured poem this week on PS.. a most magnificent one to share with us all my friend with luv.. oh miss u ..

Mac Mcgovern

June 6, 2010 at 3:30 PM

No wonder this was a winner. It is the best. Beautifully written and a pure joy to read. Love it!!!!

Dean Masciarelli

March 26, 2010 at 6:52 AM

Amy, thank you for sharing your heart strings through your soul prints with all of us here in the poetry community your wording leaves one to question these thoughts of yours and in turn your are able to convey your words in such a way that allows the reader to walk away thinking of the feather that may have come from Cupids arrow Like an angel in disguise. Have a wonderful day , Dean

Mitch White

March 25, 2010 at 4:12 AM

Very deep and beautiful Congrats Amy

Carol Sunshine Brown

March 16, 2010 at 4:58 AM

Congratulations on your win Amy in Raul's contest. Love, Carol

Noel Villarosa

March 15, 2010 at 12:58 AM

Feather in your cap for always having a lovable thoughts. Congratulations on your well-deserved win, Amy. (^_^) Noel.

Marty Owens

March 13, 2010 at 6:36 PM

Congratulations on your win...enjoyed..Marty

Andrea Dietrich

March 13, 2010 at 6:19 PM

Very interesting one! Me likes. Congratulations.

John Freeman

March 13, 2010 at 5:48 PM

Congratulations on this honor Amy. Agape, Moses

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

March 13, 2010 at 3:32 PM

Congrats Amy on your HM in Raul's recent contest.. a wonderful honor for u to so enjoy as I will mine too..luv.. Linda-Marie

Raul Moreno

March 13, 2010 at 3:02 PM

Amy, congrats on your placement in my contest...Raul

Gert W. Knop

March 9, 2010 at 3:27 PM

Hi Amy, Well thought after Senryu! Wishing you all success for the contest! Sometimes my minfd feels like a feather, light and drifting! Good job and thank you for your comment on "Bird of Innocence"..Wishing you a grat week ahead...Gert

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

March 5, 2010 at 8:11 PM

Very imaginative Amy and a great visual quality to your lovely Senryu.. thankxxx so very much for your special comments on my poetry reads also..appreciate your input..luv.. Linda-Marie..