Feast

Blackberries ripen
Fat field mice feast upon them
Leaner times ahead






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Poet Destroyer A

September 15, 2011 at 3:57 AM

a well done haiku,, Nick,... how about them field mice... enjoyed,..p.d

Nette Onclaud

July 8, 2011 at 2:00 PM

tag, you're it, nick.. got more?? thanks for coming around..:) huggs, nette

Sharon Tideswell

July 4, 2011 at 11:26 AM

Love the imagery of those field mice feasting on blackberries. Nice haiku. Thanks for your comments ~ Sharon

Nette Onclaud

June 29, 2011 at 6:53 AM

what a stunning study on conrast, nick.. superb! winning streaks if for a contest. come visit?? :) huggs, nette

Kash Poet

June 28, 2011 at 8:27 AM

Very nice imagery here....enjoyed.Thanks for visiting my Poem.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

June 28, 2011 at 5:24 AM

thankxx Nick..and that was only till I was 25 .. now am on life number three ..like a cat almost.. with new hubby but so much in between would take a book which I am working on.. so happy u enjoyed a small piece of my life.. it was and is beautiful.. always enjoy your work my friend..luv..

Carolyn Devonshire

June 28, 2011 at 4:30 AM

We like to think life will get easier in the future. Feel like one of thos "field mice," Nick. Seizing the moment whilewe can. Very thought-provoking haiku. Love, Carolyn

David Williams

June 28, 2011 at 4:25 AM

thanks for your words Nick, i still fish there to this day and often see field mice eating blackberries so nice link here. David.

Matthew Anish

June 27, 2011 at 2:33 PM

Nice haiku here! You stuck to the 5 7 5 formula which is al to the good. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Sara Kendrick

June 27, 2011 at 9:37 AM

Very good one..Enjoyed reading this one this afternoon..I hope that your sun comes through the clouds today and shines warmly upon your face with just the correct tempertature..Thanks for the kind review...Sara