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Fearfully, Wonderfully Made

I am fearfully, wonderfully made There are two eyes in my head with which I see Two ears one on each side to hear birds chirp, leaves russle, that please One mouth with which I can eat all the bounty of earth made for me Two hands which accomplish work or play Two feet to carry me forever and a day He's fearfully, wonderfully made (Bumblebee) One large body heavy in design Delicate tiny wings thatcan carry him around Fuzzy on his body and legs to carry lots of pollen He helps propagate the garden Strange creature on this earth by God's design We're fearfully, wonderfully made For our cells to be fed by protein power There's a manufacturing machine inside that works twenty-four hours It has to stretch out a chain; take it apart Then fill up and twist it back like logos linking up Then when its finished all the parts match Fits together like a zipper or train on track (This is the results of knowing about Huntington's Disease. Flipping channels on tv on day seeing a person explaining how our body has to be able to use protein..HD is caused because a person's body can't use a protein on the DNA link CAG...It is the G part that they can't use..They think that in the process of the body fixing the protein on the link that something is destroyed or damaged so that it does not link up so the body can use it.) (Same day watching religious progam the preacher used the scripture "I am fearfully and wonderfully made".) (Then I wrote a poem using bumblebee which we have many of around here..There are many carpenter bees.. So I wanted information..I learned that the bees' wings are seemingly too small for its body..Scientist say there is no way the bee can fly with those wings but it does.) I am saying this is rhyme because I don't know what else to call it..Sara

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Date: 5/25/2011 2:13:00 AM
Wonderful observation, Sara - the incredible bumblebee. A wake-up to nature is always appreciated. Love, daver
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Date: 5/24/2011 1:31:00 PM
Sara this inspiring poem, you have beautifully pieced together...love how the three sections have been done on I, he and we and with such clarity,appreciate your thoughts.The phrase "fearfully , wonderfully made" is so precise...
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Date: 5/22/2011 11:23:00 PM
And wonderfully put togther poem Sara really good to read this today.!
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Date: 5/20/2011 5:29:00 AM
Sara your words always encourage all and especially me.. we just arrived home.. oh what a ride this was.. thankxx for precious comments always my friend..luv..
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Date: 5/20/2011 12:46:00 AM
sara, thiswas a very interesting lesson and yes, I had heard that about the bumble bee today What an amazing creature it is. Just like we, as God's own creatures are!! way to be inspired! Luv, Andrea
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Date: 5/20/2011 12:08:00 AM
Well done, Sara,,, Most enjoyed... and you seem to wonder with spirit... thanks for sharing,..p.d.
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Date: 5/19/2011 8:40:00 PM
Great job on this Sara. I enjoyed reading it. R.M.
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Date: 5/19/2011 6:18:00 PM
Excellent piece, and an enjoyable read. We are wonderfully made and all creatures by his design with all of our imperfections. Writing can be a great stress reliever and I hope writing about the HD helps you cope with those afflicted.
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Date: 5/19/2011 4:12:00 PM
coming straight from the heart with great use of analogy, sara... i got so in tune with both the sensitivity and boldness of this piece... hang in there, there's help for HD.. peace and huggs! :) nette
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Date: 5/19/2011 3:09:00 PM
A very informative write, Sara. The tree really did die after my ex left, albeit gradually.
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Date: 5/19/2011 2:40:00 PM
we are fearfully and wonderfully made by the Master Creator Sara and this beautiful write expresses the need for Him more than the bodily food..food for the spirit is so much more important... wonder praise for God in this one my friend..luv.. and luv it..
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Date: 5/19/2011 1:52:00 PM
Sara, really like the metaphoric use of the bumblebee -- big body with small wings. It suggests a genetic defect although these bees seem to get by quite well. I know your family has first-hand experience with Huntington's Disease. Perhaps science will find away to prevent or treat successfully this crippling, degenerative condition. Powerful, intelligent write! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 5/19/2011 11:25:00 AM
a wonderful piece you wrote here, enjoyed reading it. thank you for commenting on 1957.
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Date: 5/19/2011 10:50:00 AM
Thank you for sharing your fabulous poetry today . It was a very interesting piece to read. Love, Carol Maybe Narrative or Lyric?
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Date: 5/19/2011 7:25:00 AM
hey I got a tune up on my computer and so far it seems to be working better.
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Date: 5/19/2011 6:19:00 AM
Sara beautiful beyond words . It's sad that we can't find ways to eradicate all the life changing diseases. Great poem. Anne
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Date: 5/19/2011 5:36:00 AM
Absolutely love your title Sara and this awesome write of yours.. love how you incorporated everything :)
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Date: 5/19/2011 5:31:00 AM
this was nicely done! cory
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Date: 5/19/2011 5:28:00 AM
Yes we are donerfully made! How preciouos we are to him(God)who created us. God bless you!!!
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