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Larry Bradfield

Fear the Sea

Sails full
Nor'easter blows
Tides pull

Clouds scud
Raindrops spatter
Makes mud

Sails rip
Could this be the
Last trip

4-4-2020
Contest: Finding Your Musette
Sponsor: Joseph May

Copyright © Larry Bradfield | Year Posted 2020

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Andrea Dietrich

April 16, 2020 at 5:22 PM

wow, you took this short form and made an excellent descriptive little tale out of it. Great job, Larry. Congrats on the win.

Larry Bradfield

April 21, 2020 at 3:09 PM

Thank you, Abdrea!

April 15, 2020 at 6:38 PM

Journeys cease with stormy seas, Congrats on your win Larry

Larry Bradfield

April 15, 2020 at 9:45 PM

Thank you, Joseph

April 5, 2020 at 10:24 AM

Great work. It's a unique poem.

Larry Bradfield

April 5, 2020 at 10:39 AM

Thank you kindly!

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