Bl Devnath Poet Verse

Fear of Vulnerable Mirage

fear of a vulnerable mirage
hides in picture of devastating war pain
homeless foodless thoughtless less to all less
too restless peace less helpless peoples’ images 
wreckage debris bleeding bodies in craters here and there  
ought to have been passed away all good days as already dreamt 
If happens in any way nothing will be there to be controlled such destruction 
world shall be back and suffer for another hundred years to regain the present position  
 


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Lynn Marie September 18, 2017 at 7:15 PM A strong poem on the disturbing ramifications of war on the innocent written with great thought. Excellent writing BL:) Bl Devnath September 19, 2017 at 11:42 AM Thanks for your support and comment. Yes, i fear of war because innocent people will become victims, if happens. Loved always, bl

Silent One September 18, 2017 at 8:03 AM Powerful write BL.. Bl Devnath September 18, 2017 at 12:08 PM Thanks my dear lovely friend for your uplifting comment and visit. Loved always, bl

Anne-Lise Andresen September 17, 2017 at 2:06 PM - A powerful poem .... but still so vulnerable, dear friend - Great written as always - If it's for contest I wish you good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Bl Devnath September 17, 2017 at 8:47 PM Thanks my dear friend for your inspiration with beautiful comment. i have just joined in the contest. Loved always, bl