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Fear of Vulnerable Mirage

fear of a vulnerable mirage hides in picture of devastating war pain homeless foodless thoughtless less to all less too restless peace less helpless peoples’ images wreckage debris bleeding bodies in craters here and there ought to have been passed away all good days as already dreamt If happens in any way nothing will be there to be controlled such destruction world shall be back and suffer for another hundred years to regain the present position For contest: Fear II Sponsored by Debbie Guzzi

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Date: 9/18/2017 7:15:00 PM
A strong poem on the disturbing ramifications of war on the innocent written with great thought. Excellent writing BL:)
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Bl Devnath
Date: 9/19/2017 11:42:00 AM
Thanks for your support and comment. Yes, i fear of war because innocent people will become victims, if happens. Loved always, bl
Date: 9/18/2017 8:03:00 AM
Powerful write BL..
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Bl Devnath
Date: 9/18/2017 12:08:00 PM
Thanks my dear lovely friend for your uplifting comment and visit. Loved always, bl
Date: 9/17/2017 2:06:00 PM
- A powerful poem .... but still so vulnerable, dear friend - Great written as always - If it's for contest I wish you good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Bl Devnath
Date: 9/17/2017 8:47:00 PM
Thanks my dear friend for your inspiration with beautiful comment. i have just joined in the contest. Loved always, bl

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