Fear of Falling

So let's all lament, 
Here in the present, 
because we've already lost our way anyways. 
Baby, please save me 
from the flames I see beneath my feet,
For I fear that they may swallow me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Petersen Potter Avatar
January 10, 2015 at 6:50 PM
Very nice pen Patrick! Enjoyed your powerful piece dear friend. A 7 from me! Have a lovely weekend! :) Love and light! xxx D."
Patrick Avatar
January 30, 2015 at 11:42 AM
Thank you! c:
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