Fear

Its a disease of the mind, Where some people find Its hard to breathe. Its hard to see Its hard to know whats around you. Your body gets stiff And you feel the need to grip On to anything surrounding you. Your eyes search for a light But its out of sight Because your eyes are shut with fear. Fear Fear Your breathing is uneasy Your stomach gets queezy Fear Fear Muscles tight With all this fright Fear Fear Emotions are high Tears ready to cry Fear You can't get rid of this fear. 25/06/2014.

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Skat A

Date: 1/7/2016 5:46:00 PM

well done

James Hyler

Date: 6/26/2014 11:09:00 AM

Thank you for sharing :)

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 6/26/2014 6:09:00 AM

fearful write.. :O?! but anyhow it is, fear can be surpassed by prayers and trust in our Dear God deliverance.. :O sometimes, we are consume by our fear however we must come to overcome them to obtain greater possibilities of our nature as humans... it's normal to cry and be discourage yet we should hope and stand up for our ownself and for our love ones.. :) GOd bless you.. :)

Jerry T Curtis

Date: 6/26/2014 6:08:00 AM

Again, another beautiful poem, Tanya. I write a lot of crazy crap , but in my opinion, what you write is what poetry was truly made for. If you keep writing, I will keep reading.......Thanks for sharing your thoughts. and remember "I can see you--------not in a creepy way though" LOL