Fear

Fear..Something you can't ignore at all.. Stays with you always,no matter where you are.. From the tor into the roots if I fall.. You can't save me,whether near or far! . I've a fear-Fear to fail again... Deep in my heart i'm really scared.. I'll lose something,something i'll gain... Will I get for whatever i've paid? . Fear to lose my near and dear.. If they leave,what will I do? Before it happens,I want you to here! You're my only worth,I don't wanna lose you! . Fear to be in a fear.. But listen before you go to Heaven ;) No matter I show or not,I do care! Thank YOU for whatever you've given! :)

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Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/17/2014 5:20:00 AM

Awesome write, loved this. Congratulations on the win, Saba

Saba Khan
Date: 5/19/2014 9:48:00 AM

Thanku :)

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/16/2014 12:15:00 AM

SABA, Congratulations!!! Thank you for supporting my contest... Always~ Linda

Saba Khan
Date: 5/16/2014 1:49:00 AM

You are always welcome :) :)

Gina Montalbo

Date: 5/15/2014 11:48:00 PM

I realy like this piece true to heart ..... Gina.... Smiles and hugs.....

Saba Khan
Date: 5/15/2014 11:52:00 PM

Thaks a lot Gina :) I really appreciate your kind words :) Wishes-Saba :)

Kelly Deschler

Date: 5/13/2014 2:31:00 PM

Everyone feels this same fear, I think. But, we must live and enjoy our lives, and not waste time worrying about what we cannot control... This poem was very expressive and nicely rhymed. A great write! :)

Saba Khan
Date: 5/15/2014 11:31:00 PM

Right :) Thank you :) :)

Paul Callus

Date: 5/12/2014 5:24:00 PM

Most people have a fear of something, but we can't keep over-worrying about what might happen! We have to think positive! // paul

Saba Khan
Date: 5/16/2014 1:50:00 AM

*WHY ;)

Saba Khan
Date: 5/15/2014 11:32:00 PM

That's ehy I said ''Thanku for whatever you've given'' :) Thank you for commenting ;)