Fear

Oh, the fear of growing old, Youthful bodies now turning cold... Death, the fear of a life unworthy.

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Katherine Stella

Date: 6/26/2010 7:55:00 AM

boy you nailed this one good I hate the unknown when where why and how hope it is like my sister tho in thy sleep keep up the great work also thanks for your kind comments on my work too

De R

Date: 6/25/2010 8:03:00 AM

This gave me the chills...everybody is afraid of dying and getting old...unfortunately, we all get to that point. great writing..kisses, Emily

Carrie Richards

Date: 6/25/2010 7:45:00 AM

The last line especially is profound and the worst fear of all. So much said in such short verse. Well done, Daniel! ~ Carrie

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/25/2010 5:06:00 AM

Nice thoughts on growing and death's tall