Sara Kendrick Poet Rhyme

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Fear

A heavy fog encompassed all the amber pines
Her predilection and consternation heightened 
Poet now attuned to unusual sounds and signs
The scene's ghostly and unearthliness so frightened
Somehow that apathy she had experienced for days
Floated away and turned into songs of highest praise
Condemnation gone, reverence for scene enlightened 

Written: November 16, 2018
Seven Words and Seven Lines
Using the meaning of predilection here of fear...

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Nette Onclaud November 20, 2018 at 4:52 PM how fluid is your content and very well penned, sara... win it, for sure!...huggs Sara Kendrick November 21, 2018 at 10:52 AM Nette, Thanks for the kind review of my work. I appreciate the visit. Sara

Christopher Flaherty November 19, 2018 at 5:16 PM Somehow Apathy Floated Away Foggy Thoughts Dark positivitey Sara Kendrick November 20, 2018 at 6:53 AM Christopher, Thanks for the kind review of my work. I appreciate your presence here. Sara

Winged Warrior November 19, 2018 at 10:51 AM Excellent rendition of the words needed Sara...ready for a win...love & light...^WW^ Sara Kendrick November 19, 2018 at 5:12 PM WW, Your review of my work heightens my sense of accomplishment. Thanks for the kind review. Sara

Andrea Dietrich November 18, 2018 at 7:33 PM wow, you did a great job with the words. I think you have a good chance at the winners' list! Sara Kendrick November 19, 2018 at 5:11 PM Andrea, Your review is so uplifting. Thanks for dropping by with your encouraging words. Sara

M. L. Kiser November 17, 2018 at 11:09 PM Oh very well done; Good luck with the contest; I think this is a winner. Had to "Fav". Sara Kendrick November 18, 2018 at 7:22 AM M.L., Thanks for the visit to my page and the encouragement in my writing. Your presence here is uplifting. I am honored that you would fav my work. Sara

Jack Horne November 16, 2018 at 12:57 PM oh, love this eerie write Sara Kendrick November 16, 2018 at 3:52 PM Jack, Thanks for the visits to my page. I am glad you liked my eerie write. I can imagine it would be scary going down a railroad tract in that thick fog. Sara