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A heavy fog encompassed all the amber pines
Her predilection and consternation heightened 
Poet now attuned to unusual sounds and signs
The scene's ghostly and unearthliness so frightened
Somehow that apathy she had experienced for days
Floated away and turned into songs of highest praise
Condemnation gone, reverence for scene enlightened 

Written: November 16, 2018
Seven Words and Seven Lines
Using the meaning of predilection here of fear...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 11/20/2018 4:52:00 PM
how fluid is your content and very well penned, sara... win it, for sure!...huggs
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/21/2018 10:52:00 AM
Nette, Thanks for the kind review of my work. I appreciate the visit. Sara
Date: 11/19/2018 5:16:00 PM
Somehow Apathy Floated Away Foggy Thoughts Dark positivitey
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Date: 11/20/2018 6:53:00 AM
Christopher, Thanks for the kind review of my work. I appreciate your presence here. Sara
Date: 11/19/2018 10:51:00 AM
Excellent rendition of the words needed Sara...ready for a win...love & light...^WW^
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/19/2018 5:12:00 PM
WW, Your review of my work heightens my sense of accomplishment. Thanks for the kind review. Sara
Date: 11/18/2018 7:33:00 PM
wow, you did a great job with the words. I think you have a good chance at the winners' list!
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/19/2018 5:11:00 PM
Andrea, Your review is so uplifting. Thanks for dropping by with your encouraging words. Sara
Date: 11/17/2018 11:09:00 PM
Oh very well done; Good luck with the contest; I think this is a winner. Had to "Fav".
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/18/2018 7:22:00 AM
M.L., Thanks for the visit to my page and the encouragement in my writing. Your presence here is uplifting. I am honored that you would fav my work. Sara
Date: 11/16/2018 12:57:00 PM
oh, love this eerie write
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 11/16/2018 3:52:00 PM
Jack, Thanks for the visits to my page. I am glad you liked my eerie write. I can imagine it would be scary going down a railroad tract in that thick fog. Sara