Fault

You did it all wrong
where u had to do it right
you left me a big hole
in the middle of my eyes
you left me a broken soul
and a twisted mind
feeling like a walking fault
in life.

Jessica 
(7/23)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Situation Avatar
July 29, 2023 at 3:28 PM
Short and sweet. But is it to someone in particular? Sometimes they are But never reach the intended.
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July 29, 2023 at 4:04 PM
Yes, I had a specific person in my mind, and yes, that person will never be reached and much will understand...but I do and I am able to write it which is a way to get it out...better out than in, right? thanks for your comment...
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