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Fault

You did it all wrong where u had to do it right you left me a big hole in the middle of my eyes you left me a broken soul and a twisted mind feeling like a walking fault in life. Jessica (7/23)

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Date: 7/29/2023 3:28:00 PM
Short and sweet. But is it to someone in particular? Sometimes they are But never reach the intended.
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Jessica Carrasco
Date: 7/29/2023 4:04:00 PM
Yes, I had a specific person in my mind, and yes, that person will never be reached and much will understand...but I do and I am able to write it which is a way to get it out...better out than in, right? thanks for your comment...

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