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Fatima Extinguishes Freedom

Culminated cloud cluster promotes ghost apparition Robed in purity unearthly, portrayed as only option Virgin white vision given blindly adopted approbation Vulnerable youngsters succumb to scare doctrine Commanding loyalty to solitary living love, avoidance Real application sways wavering suitable standard Message to refrain from rambunctious enjoyed by us Marries happy with demean mist canon demanded Susceptible pious victims of supercilious Lady Fatima Follow sparse path shadowed in shame, illiteracy Denied desire, myth written inhibits discerning latitude Dogma's reason thinly rationed induces celebacy Discipline within cage fears imminent mire of purgatory Unlocked box predicts scrutiny of scare strung thesis Indulging choice embraces mortal meridian exploratory Ridicule of able arm splint, creed's hypnosis releases 21st October 2020 Written for Contest : Fatima Sponsor : Kai Michael Neumann

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Date: 11/29/2020 8:40:00 AM
I wonder how this is related to Fatema any Fatema? Because it seems to talk of a scare doctrine, ghostly white apparition, asks to refrain from rambunctious behaviour under a supercilious lady, promoting illiteracy, celibacy, all factors and features not common to Muslim women nor related to Fatema. Is it about nuns in white?
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Sigrid Ermine
Date: 12/1/2020 1:40:00 PM
... Opinion.... Obviously, poets should hold a point. A better write has a stance, rather than a sway between two...
Date: 11/29/2020 7:10:00 AM
Congratulations, Sigrid, on your great placement for this lovely philosophic piece!!
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