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Fathomless

fathomless ocean
birthmother of life
     aching from abuse



Submitted on May 3, 2018 for contest HAIKU : THEME SEA sponsored by MICK TALBOT  -  RANKED 1ST

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Virginia Waters

Date: 6/21/2018 1:15:00 AM

most understanding - much to ponder here - missed this one previously = so much to read - V

Paul Callus

Date: 5/16/2018 9:55:00 AM

Glad I came back to this winners' list, Line. Congratulations on a very merited high flying win! This is very creative! Regards // paul

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/16/2018 11:18:00 AM

Thanks, Paul. Most appreciated.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/13/2018 2:53:00 PM

Yours , for me, was truly brilliant and very haiku sounding. Congrats on your well deserved win.

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/13/2018 3:53:00 PM

Thank you so much, Andrea. Most appreciated.

Moon Flower

Date: 5/13/2018 1:14:00 AM

Congratulations on your fine win, Line!

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/13/2018 3:53:00 PM

Thank you, Moon Flower. Much appreciated.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/12/2018 11:05:00 PM

apt analogy, Line. Kudos to you for your trophy win. :) gw

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/12/2018 11:29:00 PM

Thanks, Gershon. Much appreciated.

Jan Allison

Date: 5/12/2018 6:22:00 PM

many congrats Line:-) hugs Jan xx

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/12/2018 9:29:00 PM

Thank you so much, Jan.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/12/2018 3:59:00 PM

Congrats, Line!

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/12/2018 6:03:00 PM

Thanks, Kim. Much appreciated.

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

Date: 5/12/2018 2:24:00 PM

This more than any I've read speaks to my heart. Lovely done Line. Congratulations on your win! :) xomo!

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/12/2018 3:09:00 PM

Thank you so much, Maureen. Most appreciated.

Eve Roper

Date: 5/12/2018 2:21:00 PM

Wow, Line, the imagery and theme is fabulous..Congratulations on your great first place in the contest,... eve

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/12/2018 3:09:00 PM

Thank you so much, Eve. Most appreciated.

Janis Medders Tobechi

Date: 5/12/2018 9:58:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved placement.

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/12/2018 3:10:00 PM

Thank you so much, Sian.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/12/2018 8:28:00 AM

- Congratulations on your great first place in the contest, Line :) - Happy Weekend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/12/2018 8:34:00 AM

Thank you, Sunshine, for your much appreciated visit and comment.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 5/12/2018 7:32:00 AM

Congratulations on taking the gold medal prize! Well deserved! Hugs. Pandita

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/12/2018 7:34:00 AM

Thank you, Pandita. Much appreciated.

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/12/2018 2:15:00 AM

Big congratulations Line, I knew you'd be up there. Tom.

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/12/2018 7:34:00 AM

Thank you so much, Tom.

Jean Murray

Date: 5/12/2018 12:46:00 AM

Lovely haiku Line. Congratulations.

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/12/2018 7:26:00 AM

Thanks, Jean.

Sonia Walker

Date: 5/12/2018 12:26:00 AM

Line, hats off to you for your lofty placement. A lovely haiku. ~ Sonia

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/12/2018 7:26:00 AM

Thanks, Sonia. Much appreciated.

Elaine Gonzales

Date: 5/12/2018 12:12:00 AM

Congratulations on your well-deserved top win Line! A great very meaningful haiku :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/12/2018 7:27:00 AM

Thanks, Elaine, for your much appreciated visit and comment.

Natasha Turner

Date: 5/12/2018 12:03:00 AM

Wow! Beautiful :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/12/2018 12:10:00 AM

Thank you, Natasha, for your much appreciated visit and comment.

Moon Flower

Date: 5/11/2018 11:39:00 PM

Great one, Line. Congrats on a well-deserved win. :)

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/12/2018 12:10:00 AM

Thanks, Moon Flower. Much appreciated.

Dean Wood

Date: 5/11/2018 10:44:00 PM

I am sure she is aching Line. This one is deep (pun intended). Congratulations! I enjoyed this thought provoking haiku. Regards,

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/12/2018 12:11:00 AM

Thanks, Dean. Much appreciated.

Mick Talbot

Date: 5/11/2018 9:55:00 PM

Congratulation Line, great haiku, but aching is a metaphor suggesting the ocean feel. :-)

Line Gauthier
Date: 5/11/2018 10:31:00 PM

Yes, absolutely. You are so right... It was so much easier when I could claim ignorance. I am going to a national haiku conference next weekend... LOL They will convert me fully. So this is officially my final haiku that only partially meets the rules. LOL