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Father,Son and Me As One

Father, Son and Me as one Brighter than the noonday sun The rainbow feeds my eternal soul The morning sunrise reminds me I'm whole So as this journey has begun I hope every day to remember the Father,Son and Me as ONE!

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Terrell Martin

Date: 4/13/2012 10:51:00 AM

This sounds a bit, dare I say, Gnostic in nature? If its not, you should certainly check out Gnosticism because I get the sense your moving in that direction. But I like it very much, regardless of the philosophical overstones. A very nice piece of poetry. Thanks for sharing. Terry

Lisa Craig
Date: 4/14/2012 6:09:00 AM

Your senses are good.Although I do not choose to be tied to any ONE religion, just a seeker of Truth. I like to find the similarities in all of them. I think it is obvious who my favorite Teacher is though. Thank you for your comments I value them .

Diana Mohammed

Date: 4/13/2012 7:05:00 AM

As Anne Lise said, Beautiful is the word! Keep it up Lisa! - Diana

Lisa Craig
Date: 4/14/2012 6:11:00 AM

Thank you so much for all the comments and reading my stuff very valuable to me.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/13/2012 6:39:00 AM

Just beautiful Lisa !!!! Love it !!! - Have a nice weekend to you. - oxox Anne-Lise

Lisa Craig
Date: 4/14/2012 6:13:00 AM

Thanks so much, I love yours too!