Father,Son and Me As One

Father, Son and Me as one
Brighter than the noonday sun
The rainbow feeds my eternal soul
The morning sunrise reminds me I'm whole
So as this journey has begun
I hope every day to remember the Father,Son and Me as ONE!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Martin Avatar
April 13, 2012 at 10:51 AM
This sounds a bit, dare I say, Gnostic in nature? If its not, you should certainly check out Gnosticism because I get the sense your moving in that direction. But I like it very much, regardless of the philosophical overstones. A very nice piece of poetry. Thanks for sharing. Terry
Craig Avatar
April 14, 2012 at 6:09 AM
Your senses are good.Although I do not choose to be tied to any ONE religion, just a seeker of Truth. I like to find the similarities in all of them. I think it is obvious who my favorite Teacher is though. Thank you for your comments I value them .
Mohammed Avatar
April 13, 2012 at 7:05 AM
As Anne Lise said, Beautiful is the word! Keep it up Lisa! - Diana
Craig Avatar
April 14, 2012 at 6:11 AM
Thank you so much for all the comments and reading my stuff very valuable to me.
Andresen Avatar
April 13, 2012 at 6:39 AM
Just beautiful Lisa !!!! Love it !!! - Have a nice weekend to you. - oxox Anne-Lise
Craig Avatar
April 14, 2012 at 6:13 AM
Thanks so much, I love yours too!
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