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Forever in my heart, in my dreams in my thoughts A carving in my soul, will never be forgot, Tenderness of heart hidden beneath austere look, How very much you loved me, how much pride you took, Example ever of goodness and honesty, Resplendent in wisdom, humour in brevity! Sage in your words, and in your deeds sincere, Days have gone by, now count separation in years, A moment then comes by that catches me in tears, Yearnings of my heart, we shall settle in arrears! Premier contest winner(9) written 29/05/2021 A tribute to Fathers acrostic poetry contest L Milton Hankins Sponsored 12 syllables acrostic with rhyme

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Date: 6/3/2021 7:57:00 PM
A fitting tribute for your father, Krish! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 6/3/2021 9:23:00 PM
Thanks Kim! Yes, a lot of respect for the man who shaped my life!
Date: 6/2/2021 9:47:00 PM
A great tribute to your dad, Krish. Congratulations on your win. Enjoyed reading. My warmest wishes. God bless you. <3
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 6/3/2021 12:25:00 PM
Thanks Eve! Much obliged!:) Kind regards Krish
Date: 6/2/2021 7:11:00 PM
Wow! Congrats! Thanks for sharing this wondrous tribute to your Dad. Delightful and delighting from the start til the end. God bless you.
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 6/3/2021 9:22:00 PM
Thanks Beata! and a delight to hear from you always!:)
Date: 6/2/2021 9:18:00 AM
A wonderful poem, Krish. Your placement in my contest was well-deserved. Congratulations!
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 6/3/2021 6:25:00 AM
Thanks Milton! Pleased you like it!:)
Date: 5/30/2021 2:30:00 PM
There has always been and always will be a special bond between father and son, If we have been blessed with a good father, we will remember the love he imparted. If we have been given a painful memory of dad, in time you hope that the good memories will help heal the bad, well written piece , gl in the contest dear poet.
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 5/30/2021 10:51:00 PM
Thank you Mystic

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