Fathers Day

Favorite papa, I believe Heaven has warmly received you. And I'm sure you're proud of being a wonderful dad. That I deeply regret your absence from guiding me. Halcyon moments I've spent with you are my greatest blessings. Exhilarating emotions arise when I wit your spirit around me. Reminiscences of your love and concern are my greatest treasures. Seeds of your affection are resonating with the beats of my heart. Deep sorrow plunges me as I consider your demise. Advice and ethical principles you taught me, I follow in each step. You are my ideal, my life coach, and an influential teacher to me. Written: May 13, 2021 ALL YOURS (JUN 4) Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/13/2021 7:45:00 AM

Great tribute to your father. Alas I lost both of my parents, not to mention my wife. Great poem.

Sotto Poet
Date: 5/13/2021 10:45:00 AM

I know your sorrow loosing both parents and wife too, but we are all born to die. Blessings dear Victor

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/13/2021 7:34:00 AM

A worthy tribute to your father, my dearest friend, Lasaad. I understand your grief for his demise for I lost mine when I was ten years old. Superb, touching, and didactic writing! Blessings!

Sotto Poet
Date: 5/13/2021 10:44:00 AM

Thanks dearest Demetrios, I know your sorrow, being grown up as orphan is really hard, blessings and regards

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 5/13/2021 5:30:00 AM

Wonderful image of your Father. God bless you always, Love, Gina

Sotto Poet
Date: 5/13/2021 10:41:00 AM

Thanks Gina, appreciate your reading and kind feedback Blessings and regards