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Father's Day

Footprints left on the shores of my life - my father’s,
Amazingly strong to offer refuge and protect shelterless,
Truly compassionate to unfortunate fellow men,
Hard work inspired many to rise above their misfortunes,
Embraced nature and enjoyed company of children,
Reached life's goals with sheer determination, and courage,
Sky's the limit for a man of indomitable spirit and bravery,

Daunting many adverse situations being calm and decisive,
A doting father, a visionary - remembered with immense love and pride,
             Yet missed each and every day !  



                                               May 12, 2021
                            " A Tribute To Fathers" Poetry Contest
                                     Sponsor: L. Milton Hankins
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Brul Avatar
May 14, 2021 at 5:33 PM
An excellent tribute to your loving father. He was such a lucky father having a loving a daughter and vice versa. Best wishes in the contest.
Daniel Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 10:53 PM
A wonderful and praiseworthy tribute to your father, Mala:) thank you for my placement in your contest:)
Ray Choudhury Avatar
May 14, 2021 at 6:00 AM
Thank You, Dear Friend. Really appreciate your comment. You are a great poet, your placement is well-deserved. BW ~ Mala
Lamoureux Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 5:58 AM
What a beautiful tribute to your dad. I’m sure he is smiling down in you. Hugs Rick.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 8:29 AM
Thank you, Rick. I was his pride - although I might not be worthy of that. I was fortunate to have him as a father. BW ~ Mala
Pandit Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 5:14 AM
Sweet sentiments--in this heartfelt tribute! Well done, Mala.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 8:26 AM
Thanks, Vijay. He was my hero, and always will be - strong as well as kind. BW ~ Mala
Mcintosh Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 4:23 AM
Lovely verse and vision... Your praise shares the light of a wonderful soul. God bless you always - Love, Gina
Ray Choudhury Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 8:25 AM
Thank you, Gina. Yes, he was a wonderful soul. Blessings ~ Mala
Dietrich Avatar
May 12, 2021 at 10:19 PM
It sounds like a most lovely man he was! A fine tribute!
Ray Choudhury Avatar
May 13, 2021 at 8:25 AM
Thanks, Andrea. Yes, he was a strong as well as a kind man - very handsome too! Love ~ Mala
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