Joseph Osita Poet Senryu

Father-In-Law Cares

Love drips from his voice
As he rang me out of bed 
''Hope you guys are fine''   

These words stream my soul
To seconds of sweet silence
I replied, so fine.    

 Another dawn he'll call
Spilling the same syllables
In the same verse form.     


 For Dr.Ram Mehta's contest: 'In-Laws'  
Joseph Osita

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John Freeman June 8, 2011 at 8:03 PM Joseph, Great job on this honored presentation. Agape, Moses

Carol Sunshine Brown June 8, 2011 at 10:13 AM Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram's contest Joseph. Love, Carol

Dinda Minardi June 7, 2011 at 8:29 AM This is very sweet :). I guess in-laws can get credit too, right :)

Andrea Dietrich June 6, 2011 at 8:49 PM I remember yours.It's so sweet. one of the best! congrats.

Debbie Guzzi June 6, 2011 at 8:34 PM hmmm, too much early morning love? or not enough? LOL congrad's on your win! [She is Daddies little girl ;)] Light & Love

Linda-Marie Sweetheart June 6, 2011 at 3:43 PM congrats Joseph on your spectacular win in Dr. Ram's contest with another super write luv.. enjoy again and again..thankxx for all your sweet comments on my wins as well luv..

Gwendolen Song June 6, 2011 at 3:17 PM Joseph- Therapeutic pause works well before u respond, huh? ha ha. NIce write for Dr. Ram's contest. Congrats on your high mark! Gwendolen

Dr.Ram Mehta June 6, 2011 at 3:11 PM Congratulations on the fourth place win in my contest, Joseph

Andrea Dietrich May 25, 2011 at 7:36 PM You are lucky to have such a caring father in law!

Carolyn Devonshire May 25, 2011 at 10:56 AM I'm glad you have a good relationship with your father-in-law, Joseph. Great entry for Dr. Ram's contest! Wishing you success, my friend. Love, Carolyn

Dr.Ram Mehta May 24, 2011 at 12:44 PM Please give once over to the spelling in the title, Joseph

Dr.Ram Mehta May 24, 2011 at 12:33 PM Thanks for the entry, Joseph