Father Mckenzie's Secret

It is said, that Eleanor Rigby died in a church...
And was buried along with her name 
That's because, Father McKenzie got his hands dirty
At the church, late one night, when nobody came
 
As the father was darning his socks at night 
Eleanor had come in and she sat on a pew 
Then she whispered softly in the father's ear
"Father, the devil had sent me...to you"
 
He never seen her face before...
She must have been one of those lonely people 
So he locked the doors and grabbed her hand
And he took her to the dungeon in his steeple 

He kept her there until she died 
Twenty five years she was enslaved 
No one had ever heard of her...never  
But on a tombstone "Eleanor Rigby" was engraved 



Eleanor Rigby Who Was She Poetry Contest 
Sponsor: Jerry T. Curtis 
8-7-2019
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Wolf Avatar
August 15, 2019 at 8:48 PM
Really full of interesting ideas, Charlie. I feel a big win for you coming up here. Best always, gw
Laurie Avatar
August 14, 2019 at 1:31 AM
G'day Charles … a wonderful story that you made short; rhymed; and really interesting - thank you Charles - Lindsay
Lamoureux Avatar
August 12, 2019 at 7:50 AM
I’m blown away by this one Charlie. If this isn’t a winner it will be a robbery.
Romios Avatar
August 11, 2019 at 1:27 AM
This is a terrific write and a FAV Panagiota
Williams Avatar
August 9, 2019 at 6:39 AM
A great story Charlie, you are quite the story teller. Poor Eleanor, well I'm sure he got his socks darned for free, Lol. Good luck in the contest....Maria Hugs
Cunningham Avatar
August 8, 2019 at 1:53 AM
Got me humming that in my head , well written Charlie and good luck. Tom
Messina Avatar
August 8, 2019 at 5:36 AM
I've been humming it in my head all night long..lol Thanks Tom.. Charlie
Blown Avatar
August 8, 2019 at 12:04 AM
went to see the movie 'yesterday'... good story line
Messina Avatar
August 8, 2019 at 5:36 AM
I just saw it last week... I enjoyed it :)
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