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Father, I

Father You are love Creator of all the world in your hands I dwell

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Ann Anderson

Date: 5/20/2009 10:04:00 AM

Jeremiah such a loving touch, word perfect, God bless Ann.

Brian Strand

Date: 5/20/2009 12:08:00 AM

Amen Jeremiah.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments

Cesar Cantu

Date: 5/19/2009 6:56:00 PM

Trust in the divine and cosmos is so mysterious and jet so natural; this poem is direct, simple and flawless due to that; thanks for sharing!!

Date: 5/19/2009 3:02:00 PM

Blessings to you for sharing this inspirational message captured in just three lines. Keep on writing! Karen

Brandy Megens

Date: 5/19/2009 12:42:00 PM

i believe

Diane Christian

Date: 5/19/2009 10:53:00 AM

do you like the song, He's got the whole world in his hands, he's got the whole wide world in his hands, he's got you and me brother in his hands, its a great song, your words just sprung the song to mind now i am singing, YES that means more rain LOL just joking but I am singing. God bless you from diane

Diane Christian

Date: 5/19/2009 10:47:00 AM

Amen my friend, a super write, we all dwell in the plam of his hands, wow

Nadia Shahwan

Date: 5/19/2009 7:02:00 AM

Beautiful poem... clean faith.

James Marshall Goff

Date: 5/19/2009 4:15:00 AM

perfect prayer, Jeremiah! Jim

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 5/19/2009 4:05:00 AM

YOU BRING ME PEACE HERE--CHARMA