Father Figure

leaves whirl and cling to stout bough and branches - sigh with tempered lows and highs verdant spring is vast a cornucopian nest - sound of leaves flapping the weeps, oaks and maples enthrall father figure - sturdy and tall rest for the wild ones and the mind the shelter of shapes - winsome, kind
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Andresen Avatar
June 13, 2023 at 2:19 AM
- Congratulations Kim ... on your lovely poem in the contest, by Tania Kitchin - hugs
Rodrigues Avatar
June 13, 2023 at 5:06 AM
Thank you, Anne-Lise!
Kitchin Avatar
June 12, 2023 at 3:32 PM
Kim, a wonderful set of poems, enjoyed the imagery, congratulations on your winning placement!
Rodrigues Avatar
June 13, 2023 at 5:06 AM
Thank you, Tania!
Lindley Avatar
June 8, 2023 at 11:02 AM
Quite a wonderfully woven new creation my friend. A sure fire fav for me too. God bless...
Rodrigues Avatar
June 8, 2023 at 2:47 PM
Thank you so much! xx
Wolf Avatar
June 7, 2023 at 7:16 PM
All he's missing is the beard. ~ Father Time
Rodrigues Avatar
June 7, 2023 at 7:43 PM
Yes!
Buhagiar Avatar
June 7, 2023 at 3:03 AM
Great metaphoric poem. We admire the trees. Hugs.
Rodrigues Avatar
June 7, 2023 at 5:01 AM
I love my trees. Hugs ~ Kim
Buehler Avatar
June 6, 2023 at 4:29 PM
Beauteous spring enchants, from beneath my winsome, green protector. Love it, Kim! This is a fave. :)
Rodrigues Avatar
June 6, 2023 at 6:20 PM
Thank you so much!
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