Father and Son

TWO loving eyes brighten your skies making joy rise TWO feet running... pitter-patter forgetting instantly what was the matter your face wears a smile in your voice- laughter TWO little hands reached out for you heart beats on command benevolence grew Father and son a beautiful vision of two unquestionable love unbreakable bond this is my vision of you ONE of many reasons I love you... Lay

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Joe Maverick

Date: 7/12/2011 11:53:00 AM

Did you get my soup mail Lay...?

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/11/2011 5:09:00 PM

sweet and tender write Lay full of emotional expressions luv.. thankxx for your always warm and welcome comments on my poetry and contest entries.. much appreciated luv... am working on your contest tonight... hope to post soon.. good luck with this dynamic theme and concept luv..

Joe Maverick

Date: 7/11/2011 3:10:00 PM

Oh! can you email me your thoughts on the book Lay,? don't spare the truth, what you don't like, feel free to say..

Joe Maverick

Date: 7/11/2011 3:05:00 PM

Exellent write Lay, just made my day..

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/11/2011 12:01:00 PM

lay, it's been a while!! my gosh.. i have no words for this brilliant piece except the deep tenderness overflowing on this page.. wow! missed you..:) huggs, nette