Father and Son

TWO loving eyes
brighten your skies
making joy rise

     TWO feet running... pitter-patter
forgetting instantly
what was the matter
your face wears a smile
in your voice- laughter

     TWO little hands
reached out for you
heart beats on command
benevolence grew
Father and son
a beautiful vision of two
unquestionable love 
unbreakable bond
this is my vision of you

     ONE of many reasons

          I love you...

Lay

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 7/12/2011 11:53:00 AM
Did you get my soup mail Lay...?
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Date: 7/11/2011 5:09:00 PM
sweet and tender write Lay full of emotional expressions luv.. thankxx for your always warm and welcome comments on my poetry and contest entries.. much appreciated luv... am working on your contest tonight... hope to post soon.. good luck with this dynamic theme and concept luv..
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Date: 7/11/2011 3:10:00 PM
Oh! can you email me your thoughts on the book Lay,? don't spare the truth, what you don't like, feel free to say..
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Date: 7/11/2011 3:05:00 PM
Exellent write Lay, just made my day..
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Date: 7/11/2011 12:01:00 PM
lay, it's been a while!! my gosh.. i have no words for this brilliant piece except the deep tenderness overflowing on this page.. wow! missed you..:) huggs, nette
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