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Father

* this is a poem I wrote about my friend's father. It is written like my friend is saying it. The sun shines brightly as his jokes brighten up people's day. People's hearts beat fast like a drum as his will to care is shown through his actions. This man was a storyteller. A wise man whose story will be known forever. He was my best friend. I won't ever forget him like a parent can never forget the birth a child. That man is my father and he will be missed by many. But every night I will look up and know he is there. For although the sun is missed at night I know it is still there.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 10/26/2012 6:38:00 AM
What a beautiful day to sit and read the many diverse poems here at the Soup. I am so happy yours were among the ones I am able to read today Christia. I hope your weekend is exciting and so full of life and that you might find even more inspiration to write. Love, Carol XXXX
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Christina Wiliams
Date: 10/26/2012 3:23:00 PM
Aww, I am glad you were able to read my poem and thanks for taking the time to as well. I hope your weekend is exciting and full of life as well. :)
Date: 10/25/2012 1:43:00 PM
Lovely poem for a father - thanks for sharing it with me Christina. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Christina Wiliams
Date: 10/26/2012 3:23:00 PM
Thank you for taking the time to read it. :)

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