Father

Father,
your back is turned,
immersed in work deadlines.
Briefcase journeys take you away,
paper trails proceeding
to lead further
from home.

Father,
this picture hangs,
secured by two magnets:
your hand in mine, showing me life.
Cocooned caterpillar
learns to fly, but
returns.

Father,
I met a man
with hands as strong as yours:
certificate signed, clothes unpacked.
Eyes computer immersed,
his back is turned
from me.

Father,
my name has changed,
though I wanted yours back.
Recessively, your name resides
in genuine smiles though
woes, faithfulness,
and hope.

Father,
your name remains,
untampered by distance,
though fading with stone's weathering.
My son lays down lilacs
and I lay down
my tears.

6-6-2021
Heptastich Poetry Contest N/A
Sponsor: William Kekaula

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Date: 6/11/2021 4:01:00 PM
This is so heart-warming and so touching dear Juliet! A fav!!
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 6/12/2021 2:21:00 PM
Thanks so much, JCB.
Date: 6/10/2021 8:04:00 PM
Ooh, this is so haunting, Juliet... It's a heart-tugger and a heart-shatterer... as the generations repeat the same life story. Excellent poesy! Bravo, Gershon
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 6/12/2021 2:20:00 PM
Thanks, Gershon.
Date: 6/8/2021 7:11:00 AM
Juliet, Fine musings of life's meaning and family patriarch in a poem called 'Father'. May the magnets always hold. -Richard
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 6/10/2021 8:49:00 AM
Thanks, Richard. Our fathers shape us in ways that we might not realize until after they're gone.
Date: 6/7/2021 3:49:00 PM
These fathers are cooly efficient in death, as in life. A vanishing species, though. ~ gw
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 6/10/2021 8:46:00 AM
This one's a bit dramatic and exaggerated, but my father was a good man. I never thought his absence to be strange because I was little. Though one time I do remember being upset, just wanting undivided attention, but not knowing how to ask for it. My dad retired early so he was around much more as I grew up.
Date: 6/7/2021 9:02:00 AM
This one made me so sad... Such a powerful emotional ride... Ann
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Juliet Ligon
Date: 6/8/2021 7:27:00 PM
Thanks, Ann. This one was inspired by life. My dad traveled for work when I was young. Now I see why I would choose someone disengaged and learn to be (somewhat) content with it. One thing I learned is the importance of commitment.
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