''Fated Dream''

Blind sight in reflected face lye crumpets.
Taste-falling feet,crimson shrooms.
''Is this real?''Vanished truth.

''Go Ask Alice Poetry Contest...''
sponsored by...Debbie Guzzi...
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Greenlee Avatar
June 11, 2011 at 3:41 PM
Thank you to all who support my work with love me...
Dietrich Avatar
June 5, 2011 at 9:24 PM
'this sure reads very Alice-esque!!! good luck in the contest, my friend!
Mehta Avatar
June 5, 2011 at 6:38 PM
Wonderful expression on fated dream with apt images, Kacey
Falotico Avatar
June 5, 2011 at 8:48 AM
Intersting dreamy write...enjoyed and best wishes in the contest..Michael
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