Fate To Children

some I will raise up
meanwhile others I bring low
- a playground see-saw
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Nicole Avatar
September 27, 2018 at 7:16 PM
Truth!! In every word. I like that there can be more than one meaning behind your thoughts. Referring to the Playground see-saw, promise you won't let me down too hard. Ouch!! That would hurt. Just saying. :) Brandy
Onclaud Avatar
September 27, 2018 at 1:46 PM
you captured the highs and lows of toddler days with this magnificent senryu, jesse...huggs
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