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Fate To Children

some I will raise up meanwhile others I bring low - a playground see-saw

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 9/27/2018 7:16:00 PM
Truth!! In every word. I like that there can be more than one meaning behind your thoughts. Referring to the Playground see-saw, promise you won't let me down too hard. Ouch!! That would hurt. Just saying. :) Brandy
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Date: 9/27/2018 1:46:00 PM
you captured the highs and lows of toddler days with this magnificent senryu, jesse...huggs
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