Fate and Fortune

This northern city with headlights-eyes
Has buried me in its cold and gloom;
You'll see this place in a dreadful guise
And once sweet home will seem a tomb
Once you're aware there's no way out,
Once dreams of youth say goodbye and grin.
It goes farther and makes me doubt
In all the things I have ever seen.
Its blood has turned into ice and snow -
It's endless winter in every heart.
The winds of grief never cease to blow,
The art of grief is the greatest art.

And once in this cradle of dirt and despair
A wandering stranger demanded my mind.
He asked me about this damned northern air
I'd better not breathe - I would leave it behind. 
He said: "I'm in love with this misery, miss.
Destruction is right what we need to create.
True art is in grief, I've been dreaming of this.
My yesterday's fortune's tomorrow's fate.
I know all secrets my destiny knows,
So this boring dwelling won't be a surprise".
I thought: "He's my twin, and it clearly shows".
That evening he opened my widely shut eyes.

A perfect stranger has built a wall
To be a shield from this gloom and lies,
From endless rains of this city's gall	
That falls on me from the shattered skies. 
The wave of feelings can warm the days
Of dull existence in Bitterland
And melt the ice in this rotten place,
In every heart that it's due to mend.
This northern city with headlights-eyes
Has turned us down in its nasty voice
And... brought together. We've paid the price
Of fate to fortune. We've made the choice.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 6/5/2010 10:38:00 PM
HI, April. Just stopped by to congratulate you for making it into the finals! LUv, andrea
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Date: 6/3/2010 8:43:00 AM
That's beautifully sad, April! Congratulations on making it through the first round. All the best, Sarah
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Date: 6/3/2010 8:12:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round April. I wish you the best in the finals. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/2/2010 4:28:00 AM
very good, I mean really very good, I enjoyed this one a lot. Keep the fire and the drive going, cause your going places. Robert A. Ball
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Date: 6/1/2010 4:41:00 PM
A very nice write, good luck in the contest. Caryl
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Date: 6/1/2010 10:11:00 AM
Congratulations on being in the ones chosen from the first group to go the into the second round in the competition...Sara
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Date: 6/1/2010 2:38:00 AM
Congratulations...this is a beautiful poem! Emily
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Date: 5/31/2010 6:20:00 PM
Congrats for the first cut in the contest
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Date: 5/31/2010 1:50:00 PM
Congratulations on making it through the first round of the Poetry Soup contest with this poem. Best wishes in the finals. Karen
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Date: 4/15/2010 8:07:00 PM
I'm curious about which city this is ... smile ... from the headlight eyes I'd say Detroit ... am I right? .... Excellent writing here April and a well-deserved selection to be featured this week here at the Soup. Congratulations !!
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Date: 4/13/2010 10:49:00 PM
Congratulations on your featured write. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 4/13/2010 5:36:00 PM
Congrats April on "Fate and Fortune" being featured. Vince
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Date: 4/12/2010 12:18:00 PM
Many congrats on your featured piece this week. Rgds Janette
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Date: 4/12/2010 11:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week April. May you have many more features. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/28/2010 9:13:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poetry today April. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol
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