Fate

I dreamt from slums to skies. In the garbage pushed into, I wept and hardly noticed the emerging delicate wings.

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Beata Agustin

Date: 7/20/2024 4:41:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/20/2016 9:12:00 AM

Ash, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA

Skat A

Date: 12/20/2015 2:06:00 PM

ASH, stopped by to enjoy some of the best poems and poets of 2010 - 1015 :) Hope you are well enjoying what is left of 2015. Sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do during 2016. ~SKAT LOVE~

David Meade

Date: 11/29/2014 9:11:00 AM

Life comes even from our garbage -- nicely done.

Ash Aroma
Date: 11/29/2014 9:25:00 AM

Thank you david :) //hugs,Ash