Fate

Stillness, quiet, cool Morn where roosters rule Not a cricket's cheer Only a Purple Finch near A clear yellow sun Up high so very soon The Mockingbird sings Joy his lover brings Gratitude for porch Early morn not scorch Eastward facing wait For day's coming fate_

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Twanna Irisha

Date: 6/5/2012 7:41:00 AM

very nice :)

Jack Horne

Date: 5/27/2012 1:47:00 PM

Another gem where I feel like I'm there with you on your porch - what a magical place it sounds, Sara

Russell Sivey

Date: 5/26/2012 1:07:00 PM

What an incredible, outstanding write my friend! I really enjoyed your tremendous poem that you have written! I just love your write completely! Great Work!!

Josie Whitehead

Date: 5/26/2012 11:08:00 AM

Hi Sara. A clear picture you paint here - sharp and clear as only poetry can paint.

Ronny Madonsela

Date: 5/26/2012 10:16:00 AM

i like the flow and tone of the poem sara. I also love how you used a natural elements and then pair it with an animal in the stanzas , a quite unique bt interesting trend. I love it! *SMILES* RON