Sara Kendrick Poet Couplet

Fate

Stillness, quiet, cool
Morn where roosters rule
Not a cricket's cheer
Only a Purple Finch near

A clear yellow sun
Up high so very soon
The Mockingbird sings
Joy his lover brings

Gratitude for porch
Early morn not scorch
Eastward facing wait
For day's coming fate_

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Twanna Irisha June 5, 2012 at 7:41 AM very nice :)

Jack Horne May 27, 2012 at 1:47 PM Another gem where I feel like I'm there with you on your porch - what a magical place it sounds, Sara

Russell Sivey May 26, 2012 at 1:07 PM What an incredible, outstanding write my friend! I really enjoyed your tremendous poem that you have written! I just love your write completely! Great Work!!

Josie Whitehead May 26, 2012 at 11:08 AM Hi Sara. A clear picture you paint here - sharp and clear as only poetry can paint.

Ronny Madonsela May 26, 2012 at 10:16 AM i like the flow and tone of the poem sara. I also love how you used a natural elements and then pair it with an animal in the stanzas , a quite unique bt interesting trend. I love it! *SMILES* RON