Fate

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fearless I stand strong In the midst of wrath and tears~ master of my fate darkness all around, yet I rise, unafraid, strong~ captain of my soul In the clutch of fate, my soul remains unconquered~ unafraid, I stand night's black pit surrounds, but my soul, unwavering~ master of my fate

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Abdullah Alhemaidy

Date: 9/14/2023 5:13:00 PM

I do believe in fate (good or bad). To stand up again and again is so good and great.

Speaks Volumes

Date: 9/3/2023 12:58:00 AM

To be able to stand strong in the face of adversity is a gift from God. Wonderful poem !

Robert Lindley

Date: 8/27/2023 5:15:00 PM

My friend this is a poem of dauntless heart and courage. " fearless I stand strong In the midst of wrath and tears~ master of my fate "" Damn I wish that I could have written that as it so aptly describes me in my 20's up to my 50's. After fifty I slowed down. a very fine gift to us. A fav.. God bless.

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/27/2023 11:52:00 AM

Whoa!! I can feel the strength in this one. Sometimes in the darkest of times I do am afraid, but God is always there, and things do work out. Thanks for sharing this one with us and for dropping by my page with congrats. Sara