Fate

Forever is what will happen At times ridiculous, and others tragic Taking a step closer to it everyday Egregious sometimes too

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Jay Loveless

Date: 9/23/2009 9:25:00 AM

Foreverrr...is not always so long...hmmm more thoughts...thank you forr sharing your gift Jacob Wolf. you are trruly an inspirrration. a gift, as well as gifted. you are the giver of gifts, giving me the muse i need, and had lost. thank you foreverrr, Raiin

Michael Torres

Date: 11/4/2008 11:07:00 PM

Jacob this is wonderful. You like James says are gifted. God bless you Michael

James Foulk

Date: 11/4/2008 8:21:00 PM

Jacob you do have a gift for poetry for a 15 year, just keep on penning, enjoy your poetry so far. thank you for reading my grasshoppers on parade. yes I do love nature and all the creatures around us, i seem to know how they feel or would react to something. They are God's creatures and I believe we should respect them and take care of them the best we can.