Fatal Flaw

FATAL FLAW Let it be known & be shown   to accrue upon demand  servitude where  hearts reside then align      as one after the storm  within eloquence&grace    shall be a free intent to withstand    & embrace     turn into gold upon the errant tide     then to arise to debate a begotten gain  in fractured hearts sheltered   then   to hold unbound &to inspire ere    shrivelled on the vine THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE without grammatical symbols the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and respond thus making the form a two way interplay and often a unique interpretation by the enigma so derived