Fatal Flaw
FATAL FLAW
Let it be known
& be shown
to accrue
upon demand
servitude
where hearts reside
then align
as one
after the storm
within
eloquence&grace
shall be
a free intent
to withstand
& embrace
turn into gold
upon
the errant tide
then to arise
to debate a begotten gain
in fractured hearts
sheltered
then
to hold unbound
&to inspire
ere
shrivelled
on the vine
THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE without grammatical symbols the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and respond thus making the form a two way interplay and often a unique interpretation by the enigma so derived
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