Fatal Fall
i have fallen several times in life
last one however took my life
no pain before this i could recall
those were your eyes from which i fall
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It was cool and sunshine
then clouds suddenly hide the sky
all silver lines vanished too
no ray of hope remained in life
all falls are not so fatal
last one was really breath taken
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