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like feeling the fall when approaching the edge of the world yet wait why would my own weight pull me down thinking i've always been an outlaw but this will be gravely breaking the law of gravity

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Date: 11/12/2019 9:55:00 AM
Nay, fat is a social construct! A goddamn false teeth. A serious breaking the law) Greatly penned, Jeff.
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 11/12/2019 10:34:00 AM
Thanks Kurt.
Date: 11/12/2019 9:20:00 AM
Love it.
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Jeff Connelly
Date: 11/12/2019 10:34:00 AM
Thanks Maureen. Two from this gloomy morning which continues with two more this after noon.

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