Fasting

If you ever have the chance to fast,
One thing you’ll want to know
Is why, as time goes crawling past,
The hours seem so slow!
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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October 14, 2016 at 2:58 AM
OOOHHH yes, been there, done that. Last week even. I can SO much relate....
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October 13, 2016 at 8:17 PM
haha, I just had to stop by and see this one, since I will fast tonight before a blood test in the morning!
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October 12, 2016 at 11:47 AM
Ha, it sure does seem that way. Nicely written. This was fun.
Bauer Avatar
October 13, 2016 at 4:51 PM
thank you, chris! i'm glad it's something i don't do often...
Bose Avatar
October 12, 2016 at 11:46 AM
Such a valid observation expressed in a succinct and enjoyable way. Fun. Thanks, Dave
Bauer Avatar
October 13, 2016 at 4:51 PM
i appreciate the comment, david! thanks for reading...
Allison Avatar
October 12, 2016 at 11:37 AM
Oh I have been there for a blood test - it is not fun especially if other people around you are eating:-( hugs Jan xx
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October 13, 2016 at 4:50 PM
yes, that makes it so much more challenging! thanks for the comment, jan...
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