Fasting

If you ever have the chance to fast, One thing you’ll want to know Is why, as time goes crawling past, The hours seem so slow!

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Date: 10/14/2016 2:58:00 AM

OOOHHH yes, been there, done that. Last week even. I can SO much relate....

Date: 10/13/2016 8:17:00 PM

haha, I just had to stop by and see this one, since I will fast tonight before a blood test in the morning!

Date: 10/12/2016 11:47:00 AM

Ha, it sure does seem that way. Nicely written. This was fun.

Ilene Bauer
Date: 10/13/2016 4:51:00 PM

thank you, chris! i'm glad it's something i don't do often...

Date: 10/12/2016 11:46:00 AM

Such a valid observation expressed in a succinct and enjoyable way. Fun. Thanks, Dave

Ilene Bauer
Date: 10/13/2016 4:51:00 PM

i appreciate the comment, david! thanks for reading...

Date: 10/12/2016 11:37:00 AM

Oh I have been there for a blood test - it is not fun especially if other people around you are eating:-( hugs Jan xx

Ilene Bauer
Date: 10/13/2016 4:50:00 PM

yes, that makes it so much more challenging! thanks for the comment, jan...