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Flashes of lights, cameras and buzz, Assembly of connoisseurs and fuss, Stage is set for the show to begin, Half whispered words circle in the din, In come the girls in their new display, On catwalk with a swing and a sway, No expression on face, rigid gaze, Silhouette of colours to amaze, Half starved models chosen to parade, One after one in a Cavalcade, World of pretences, it’s a money game! 3rd placement Written 14/04/2021 Line Gauthier sponsored Any Acrostic 10 to 12lines on any topic 9 syllables each line 11 lines

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Date: 4/18/2021 7:24:00 PM
Great acrostic, Krish! You described a fashion show well. Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
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Krish Radhakrishna
Date: 4/18/2021 7:35:00 PM
Thanks Kim, Wanted to create something different! Thank you for your encouragement!
Date: 4/17/2021 5:38:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Krish, a beautiful write. Hugs and blessings Jennifer.
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Date: 4/17/2021 10:23:00 AM
Thanks Jennifer, Glad it was placed! a bit off beat!

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