Charles Messina Poet Verse

Fascination

The mother 
Inside her womb 
A life 
A baby girl 
Welcome to the world.... 
Little one 
So soft 
So tiny 
So cute 
The father 
He cries too! 
Joyfully happy! 
A family anew 
Birth 
One, then two...then three! 


Pick-A-Title, Vol 18 Yalto 2 Poetry Contest 
Sponsored by Edward Ibeh 
6-1-2020

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Darlene De Beaulieu June 29, 2020 at 2:14 PM Hello Charles Messina, this is a lovely family unit. Life should be like this. Loving.Enjoy your day my friend.

Carole Duet June 19, 2020 at 5:54 PM Yes, the birth of a baby is really fascinating and a wonderful blessing. Such a sweet poem, Charlie, and congratulations.

Funom Makama June 15, 2020 at 4:24 PM Remarkable lines, true words, amazing piece from a very deep and wise mind. I love every bit of this. Great work Charles.

Susan Ashley June 14, 2020 at 8:53 AM Two's company but three's a family! Your poem is so tender and beautiful, Charlie. The enchantment and elation of your poem is contagious and I find myself beaming as well. Congratulations on your wonderful win with this intimate and moving piece. Warmest wishes always, my charming friend.. ~Susan

Sam Kauffman June 8, 2020 at 3:32 PM Threefold joy! What could be better. So good to see you on the podium! Hope you are well, my friend! Blessings!

Aditi Mishra June 8, 2020 at 8:10 AM Back to congratulate you on your win Charles :) Blessings

Andrea Dietrich June 7, 2020 at 3:07 PM back again to say congratulations, Charles!

Anne-Lise Andresen June 7, 2020 at 2:09 PM - I love your Yalto ... congratulations, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Edward Ibeh June 7, 2020 at 7:17 AM Wonderful! Congratulations on your win in my contest, Charlie!:-)

Harry Horsman June 5, 2020 at 9:54 AM Does this mean it was triplets, or 1.2.3. as you state in your poem?, love this Charles, different and very nice...

Connie Marcum Wong June 4, 2020 at 1:36 PM Oh this is just wonderful Charles. Sometimes the father gets left out but they are the other half who love equally. My tiny newborn g.daughter is thrilled when she sees Daddy. I bet this will be a top winner! I loved it! Blessings xxoo

Andrea Dietrich June 2, 2020 at 6:18 PM ahh, what a happy yalto!!

Judy Ball June 2, 2020 at 3:24 PM Wonderful insight here. The magical beauty of the pregnancy. I love the way you bring out the 1 2 3 concept, Lovely. God Bless, JB

Arturo Michael June 2, 2020 at 10:48 AM Once you've got the stamina...and soil is fertile.. the produce is unlimited...I like the concept of the write...simple and sweet

Winged Warrior June 2, 2020 at 7:53 AM Excellent! Charles...that's the way it should be here on Earth...the greatest unit that God intended~the family...not riots, protests, and rumors of wars...love you brother...stay safe and best wishes...a fav and sure winner...the Wingster :o)

Swetha Vangaveti June 2, 2020 at 3:05 AM Awwww!!! This is priceless!!

Tom Cunningham June 2, 2020 at 2:46 AM Nothing more amazing than the birth of a child, I was there for all my three being born. Hope you're well Charlie. Tom

Aditi Mishra June 2, 2020 at 12:17 AM This is really soothing and beautiful Charles. Loved the innocence in your imagery. Best wishes :)

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders June 2, 2020 at 12:08 AM Oh wow, you tripled the fun and love! Good luck in the contest with this sweet entry, Charles. xx Rhonda:)