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Fascination

The mother Inside her womb A life A baby girl Welcome to the world.... Little one So soft So tiny So cute The father He cries too! Joyfully happy! A family anew Birth One, then two...then three! Pick-A-Title, Vol 18 Yalto 2 Poetry Contest Sponsored by Edward Ibeh 6-1-2020

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Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 6/29/2020 2:14:00 PM

Hello Charles Messina, this is a lovely family unit. Life should be like this. Loving.Enjoy your day my friend.

Carole Duet

Date: 6/19/2020 5:54:00 PM

Yes, the birth of a baby is really fascinating and a wonderful blessing. Such a sweet poem, Charlie, and congratulations.

Funom Makama

Date: 6/15/2020 4:24:00 PM

Remarkable lines, true words, amazing piece from a very deep and wise mind. I love every bit of this. Great work Charles.

Susan Ashley

Date: 6/14/2020 8:53:00 AM

Two's company but three's a family! Your poem is so tender and beautiful, Charlie. The enchantment and elation of your poem is contagious and I find myself beaming as well. Congratulations on your wonderful win with this intimate and moving piece. Warmest wishes always, my charming friend.. ~Susan

Sam Kauffman

Date: 6/8/2020 3:32:00 PM

Threefold joy! What could be better. So good to see you on the podium! Hope you are well, my friend! Blessings!

Aditi Mishra

Date: 6/8/2020 8:10:00 AM

Back to congratulate you on your win Charles :) Blessings

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/7/2020 3:07:00 PM

back again to say congratulations, Charles!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/7/2020 2:09:00 PM

- I love your Yalto ... congratulations, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Edward Ibeh

Date: 6/7/2020 7:17:00 AM

Wonderful! Congratulations on your win in my contest, Charlie!:-)

Harry Horsman

Date: 6/5/2020 9:54:00 AM

Does this mean it was triplets, or 1.2.3. as you state in your poem?, love this Charles, different and very nice...

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 6/4/2020 1:36:00 PM

Oh this is just wonderful Charles. Sometimes the father gets left out but they are the other half who love equally. My tiny newborn g.daughter is thrilled when she sees Daddy. I bet this will be a top winner! I loved it! Blessings xxoo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/2/2020 6:18:00 PM

ahh, what a happy yalto!!

Judy Ball

Date: 6/2/2020 3:24:00 PM

Wonderful insight here. The magical beauty of the pregnancy. I love the way you bring out the 1 2 3 concept, Lovely. God Bless, JB

Arturo Michael

Date: 6/2/2020 10:48:00 AM

Once you've got the stamina...and soil is fertile.. the produce is unlimited...I like the concept of the write...simple and sweet

Winged Warrior

Date: 6/2/2020 7:53:00 AM

Excellent! Charles...that's the way it should be here on Earth...the greatest unit that God intended~the family...not riots, protests, and rumors of wars...love you brother...stay safe and best wishes...a fav and sure winner...the Wingster :o)

Swetha Vangaveti

Date: 6/2/2020 3:05:00 AM

Awwww!!! This is priceless!!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/2/2020 2:46:00 AM

Nothing more amazing than the birth of a child, I was there for all my three being born. Hope you're well Charlie. Tom

Aditi Mishra

Date: 6/2/2020 12:17:00 AM

This is really soothing and beautiful Charles. Loved the innocence in your imagery. Best wishes :)

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 6/2/2020 12:08:00 AM

Oh wow, you tripled the fun and love! Good luck in the contest with this sweet entry, Charles. xx Rhonda:)