JC Brul Poet Verse

Fascination

I see you...
                                  above my porch;
                                        Roses...
                                pink, red and white
                                 dancing in delight
                                    like my heart
                                        beating
                               when your face turns
                                         aglow.
                                      I feel you...
                                   'neath my skin...
                                 warm as an ember
                                in the coldest winter;
                                         YOU...
                                 turn it to summer.


1ST PLACE 
BRIAN'S SELECT B, any form, any theme
Contest Judged:  6/11/2020 1:45:00 AM
Sponsored by: Brian Strand

3RD PLACE
Edward Ibeh's Pick-A-Title, Vol 18 - Yalto 2 - Poetry Contest

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Diane Perna October 10, 2021 at 12:58 PM Wow, you're super talented! I love many of your poems, incredible!

John Watt June 20, 2020 at 11:02 PM With beauty, warmth, nature, and love, your poem hits all the high points for me. Enjoyed the read, JCB. Blessings to you, John

Debjani Mitra June 19, 2020 at 10:41 PM So cute.... simple yet full of emotions.. that's love... lovely yalto

Malabika Ray Choudhury June 16, 2020 at 5:39 PM Beautiful! Love this poem, JCB! Want to read more and more of your creative and passionate writing! Love, Mala

Vijay Pandit June 11, 2020 at 12:36 PM Delighted to see this poem win TOP honors, JCB..BIG congrats!

Sam Kauffman June 8, 2020 at 2:49 PM JCB your Yalto made me smile especially with images like "neath my skin/warm as an ember." So creative! Congratulations on your win!

Aditi Mishra June 8, 2020 at 7:34 AM "warm as an ember in the coldest winter"...such a soothing feeling! An instant fave for me. Congratulations on your win :)

Andrea Dietrich June 7, 2020 at 3:02 PM I absolutely adore this one. Congrats. And also a fave.

Anne-Lise Andresen June 7, 2020 at 2:03 PM - A great and creative 3rd place ... with a smile ...congratulations so much, JCB :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Edward Ibeh June 7, 2020 at 6:56 AM This is an awesome Yalto, JCB:-) Heartiest congratulations on your podium finish! JC Brul June 7, 2020 at 8:50 AM Thank you dear poet Edward for the place ..All the best.

Gershon Wolf May 26, 2020 at 3:40 PM Fascinating! Lovely penned! :) gw JC Brul June 7, 2020 at 8:49 AM Thanks dear poet Gershon..Keep safe.

Silent One May 25, 2020 at 5:20 PM A beautiful moment... Sensual and romantic.. JC Brul May 25, 2020 at 5:42 PM Thank you dear poet Silent One...You captured the message.

Gordon Mcconnell May 25, 2020 at 11:25 AM Lovely piece so well penned indeed JCB, Blessings,Gordon JC Brul May 25, 2020 at 5:41 PM Thank you dear poet Gordon for dropping by and leaving a heartwarming comment. Stay safe.

Harry Horsman May 25, 2020 at 9:42 AM You take one there, JCB, such is this wonderful poetry... JC Brul May 25, 2020 at 10:01 AM Thank your dear poet Harry for you appreciation..Best wishes!

Kim Rodrigues May 25, 2020 at 9:41 AM Beautiful! Nicely done Yalto! A fun form! JC Brul May 25, 2020 at 10:01 AM Thank you dear poet Kim. I just known this form lately. It's fun to weave such form..Stay safe!

Connie Marcum Wong May 24, 2020 at 6:35 PM What a beautiful Yalto JCB! You have mastered this form with great talent! xxoo JC Brul May 24, 2020 at 8:40 PM Ohhh, thank you so much dear poet Connie for such a heartwarming comment. I am truly humbled. Be safe!