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I see you... above my porch; Roses... pink, red and white dancing in delight like my heart beating when your face turns aglow. I feel you... 'neath my skin... warm as an ember in the coldest winter; YOU... turn it to summer. 1ST PLACE BRIAN'S SELECT B, any form, any theme Contest Judged: 6/11/2020 1:45:00 AM Sponsored by: Brian Strand 3RD PLACE Edward Ibeh's Pick-A-Title, Vol 18 - Yalto 2 - Poetry Contest

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Date: 6/20/2020 11:02:00 PM
With beauty, warmth, nature, and love, your poem hits all the high points for me. Enjoyed the read, JCB. Blessings to you, John
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Date: 6/19/2020 10:41:00 PM
So cute.... simple yet full of emotions.. that's love... lovely yalto
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Date: 6/16/2020 5:39:00 PM
Beautiful! Love this poem, JCB! Want to read more and more of your creative and passionate writing! Love, Mala
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Date: 6/11/2020 12:36:00 PM
Delighted to see this poem win TOP honors, JCB..BIG congrats!
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Date: 6/8/2020 2:49:00 PM
JCB your Yalto made me smile especially with images like "neath my skin/warm as an ember." So creative! Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 6/8/2020 7:34:00 AM
"warm as an ember in the coldest winter"...such a soothing feeling! An instant fave for me. Congratulations on your win :)
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Date: 6/7/2020 3:02:00 PM
I absolutely adore this one. Congrats. And also a fave.
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Date: 6/7/2020 2:03:00 PM
- A great and creative 3rd place ... with a smile ...congratulations so much, JCB :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/7/2020 6:56:00 AM
This is an awesome Yalto, JCB:-) Heartiest congratulations on your podium finish!
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Date: 6/7/2020 8:50:00 AM
Thank you dear poet Edward for the place ..All the best.
Date: 5/26/2020 3:40:00 PM
Fascinating! Lovely penned! :) gw
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Date: 6/7/2020 8:49:00 AM
Thanks dear poet Gershon..Keep safe.
Date: 5/25/2020 5:20:00 PM
A beautiful moment... Sensual and romantic..
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Date: 5/25/2020 5:42:00 PM
Thank you dear poet Silent One...You captured the message.
Date: 5/25/2020 11:25:00 AM
Lovely piece so well penned indeed JCB, Blessings,Gordon
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Date: 5/25/2020 5:41:00 PM
Thank you dear poet Gordon for dropping by and leaving a heartwarming comment. Stay safe.
Date: 5/25/2020 9:42:00 AM
You take one there, JCB, such is this wonderful poetry...
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Date: 5/25/2020 10:01:00 AM
Thank your dear poet Harry for you appreciation..Best wishes!
Date: 5/25/2020 9:41:00 AM
Beautiful! Nicely done Yalto! A fun form!
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Date: 5/25/2020 10:01:00 AM
Thank you dear poet Kim. I just known this form lately. It's fun to weave such form..Stay safe!
Date: 5/24/2020 6:35:00 PM
What a beautiful Yalto JCB! You have mastered this form with great talent! xxoo
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Date: 5/24/2020 8:40:00 PM
Ohhh, thank you so much dear poet Connie for such a heartwarming comment. I am truly humbled. Be safe!