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Fascination

I see you...
                                  above my porch;
                                        Roses...
                                pink, red and white
                                 dancing in delight
                                    like my heart
                                        beating
                               when your face turns
                                         aglow.
                                      I feel you...
                                   'neath my skin...
                                 warm as an ember
                                in the coldest winter;
                                         YOU...
                                 turn it to summer.


1ST PLACE 
BRIAN'S SELECT B, any form, any theme
Contest Judged:  6/11/2020 1:45:00 AM
Sponsored by: Brian Strand

3RD PLACE
Edward Ibeh's Pick-A-Title, Vol 18 - Yalto 2 - Poetry Contest

Copyright © JCB Brul | Year Posted 2020

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Diane Perna Date: 10/10/2021 12:58:00 PM Wow, you're super talented! I love many of your poems, incredible! Login to Reply

John Watt Date: 6/20/2020 11:02:00 PM With beauty, warmth, nature, and love, your poem hits all the high points for me. Enjoyed the read, JCB. Blessings to you, John Login to Reply

Debjani Mitra Date: 6/19/2020 10:41:00 PM So cute.... simple yet full of emotions.. that's love... lovely yalto Login to Reply

Malabika Ray Choudhury Date: 6/16/2020 5:39:00 PM Beautiful! Love this poem, JCB! Want to read more and more of your creative and passionate writing! Love, Mala Login to Reply

Vijay Pandit Date: 6/11/2020 12:36:00 PM Delighted to see this poem win TOP honors, JCB..BIG congrats! Login to Reply

Sam Kauffman Date: 6/8/2020 2:49:00 PM JCB your Yalto made me smile especially with images like "neath my skin/warm as an ember." So creative! Congratulations on your win! Login to Reply

Aditi Mishra Date: 6/8/2020 7:34:00 AM "warm as an ember in the coldest winter"...such a soothing feeling! An instant fave for me. Congratulations on your win :) Login to Reply

Andrea Dietrich Date: 6/7/2020 3:02:00 PM I absolutely adore this one. Congrats. And also a fave. Login to Reply

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 6/7/2020 2:03:00 PM - A great and creative 3rd place ... with a smile ...congratulations so much, JCB :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply

Edward Ibeh Date: 6/7/2020 6:56:00 AM This is an awesome Yalto, JCB:-) Heartiest congratulations on your podium finish! Login to Reply JCB Brul Date: 6/7/2020 8:50:00 AM Thank you dear poet Edward for the place ..All the best.

Gershon Wolf Date: 5/26/2020 3:40:00 PM Fascinating! Lovely penned! :) gw Login to Reply JCB Brul Date: 6/7/2020 8:49:00 AM Thanks dear poet Gershon..Keep safe.

Silent One Date: 5/25/2020 5:20:00 PM A beautiful moment... Sensual and romantic.. Login to Reply JCB Brul Date: 5/25/2020 5:42:00 PM Thank you dear poet Silent One...You captured the message.

Gordon Mcconnell Date: 5/25/2020 11:25:00 AM Lovely piece so well penned indeed JCB, Blessings,Gordon Login to Reply JCB Brul Date: 5/25/2020 5:41:00 PM Thank you dear poet Gordon for dropping by and leaving a heartwarming comment. Stay safe.

Harry Horsman Date: 5/25/2020 9:42:00 AM You take one there, JCB, such is this wonderful poetry... Login to Reply JCB Brul Date: 5/25/2020 10:01:00 AM Thank your dear poet Harry for you appreciation..Best wishes!

Kim Rodrigues Date: 5/25/2020 9:41:00 AM Beautiful! Nicely done Yalto! A fun form! Login to Reply JCB Brul Date: 5/25/2020 10:01:00 AM Thank you dear poet Kim. I just known this form lately. It's fun to weave such form..Stay safe!

Connie Marcum Wong Date: 5/24/2020 6:35:00 PM What a beautiful Yalto JCB! You have mastered this form with great talent! xxoo Login to Reply JCB Brul Date: 5/24/2020 8:40:00 PM Ohhh, thank you so much dear poet Connie for such a heartwarming comment. I am truly humbled. Be safe!