Fascination

Ash, sparks drifting up,
On the fire's updraft borne,
Like souls go skyward
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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De Beaulieu Avatar
March 21, 2019 at 10:20 AM
Hello Andrew,as i read this poem I can see the sparks drifting upwards ,like the souls goin upwards. have a nice day my friend.
Krutsinger Avatar
March 5, 2019 at 10:42 PM
Metaphorically and poetically sound, my friend.
Fairchild Avatar
March 6, 2019 at 1:07 AM
Thank you!
Dawson Avatar
March 5, 2019 at 7:02 PM
Nice imagery! Excellent word choices!
Fairchild Avatar
March 5, 2019 at 7:12 PM
Thank You!
Gauthier Avatar
March 4, 2019 at 7:29 AM
Lovely, Andrew. Your title adds an extra lovely dimension.
Fairchild Avatar
March 5, 2019 at 7:11 PM
Thank You very much! I appreciate it!
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