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Fascination

Ash, sparks drifting up, On the fire's updraft borne, Like souls go skyward

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Date: 3/21/2019 10:20:00 AM
Hello Andrew,as i read this poem I can see the sparks drifting upwards ,like the souls goin upwards. have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 3/5/2019 10:42:00 PM
Metaphorically and poetically sound, my friend.
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Andrew Fairchild
Date: 3/6/2019 1:07:00 AM
Thank you!
Date: 3/5/2019 7:02:00 PM
Nice imagery! Excellent word choices!
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Andrew Fairchild
Date: 3/5/2019 7:12:00 PM
Thank You!
Date: 3/4/2019 7:29:00 AM
Lovely, Andrew. Your title adds an extra lovely dimension.
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Andrew Fairchild
Date: 3/5/2019 7:11:00 PM
Thank You very much! I appreciate it!

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